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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I'm having trouble getting past the txt speak tbh.
And there are 3 grammar errors in your status alone...
Sounds awful I know but it does make a difference |
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By *viatrixWoman
over a year ago
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What previous posters have said. Check your grammar and spelling. Lose the “lol”... it can be quite irritating.
Photos are run of the mill for a man’s profile on here, too many cock pics, but you have a profile face pic there so people can have an idea what you look like. It is the content of your profile that needs lots, but lots of work. Good luck. |
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Definitely put some effort into Your pics and correctly wrote your bio minus the text speak.
Also it comes off a little desperate if I'm brutally Honest with all the channels to contact you and the "mail mail mail"
I like a Confident guy who tells me what he likes and wants but leaves something to tease.
Tell us why you're on fab, what you're looking to gain, just a bit about yourself really. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The photos are better than when I glanced earlier, big improvement.
The bio is better, but I would re word the text after all ladies are ‘gawjus’. Where you say you ‘need’ fun is a bit off putting, and also take out ‘could b fun’ and ‘genuine ppl only’ as I’m not sure that serves much purpose.
I wouldn’t add anyone just for pictures either.
Mostly though, be yourself  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I think it needs work. It does give off an air of desperation and the spelling and grammar are poor. I didn’t look at your pics because the comments from others that there are lots of dick pics put me off. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"The photos are better than when I glanced earlier, big improvement.
The bio is better, but I would re word the text after all ladies are ‘gawjus’. Where you say you ‘need’ fun is a bit off putting, and also take out ‘could b fun’ and ‘genuine ppl only’ as I’m not sure that serves much purpose.
I wouldn’t add anyone just for pictures either.
Mostly though, be yourself "
thank you am trying  |
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