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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
In summary it's not awful, and I've seen a lot worse, but it's alsofairly bland and generic, and much like thousands of other guys profiles on here so won't make you stand out.
I'd also suggest a few more pics would do you no harm.
To look at the specifics of your text:
Your first paragraph kind of contradicts itself, you start off saying you're looking for a FWB/FB but then say it can be "one off" - now of course you can never know someone will become a regular meet until you've had that initial one, but the way it reads conflicts.
The first part of the next paragraph where you describe yourself physically is unnecessary, people can see your height/body type from your profile stats and the pics you have on show, and if they interact with you will be able to get a better idea of your looks from a pic.
Being on-time, clean and nice should surely all be "givens" so no real need to mention them. Know you're trying to give people a sense of you, but there are other ways to do that without stating the obvious - no-one is ever going to say in their profile "I'll always be late, not shower beforehand and might be in a mood" so people will take comments like yours with a pinch of salt.
How can you "make sure" a woman you don't know "cums as much as she wants to"? Some women don't, some women can only do so a specific way etc - so until you've met them you don't know you can make sure of anything like that.
Asking for Fabs of your pics as an indicator of interest is quite naive - if people Fab a pic it means nothing more than they like the pic, so if people think you may be monitoring for Fabs and will message as a result (which is possibly the unwritten message in your statement) they won't do so, so it's kind of counter-productive.
Appreciate all that may read as a bit of a savaging, but would rather give an honest perspective as it won't help you otherwise.
Know it's not easy writing a profile, especially as there is no magic, catch all formula, but generally speaking finding something that helps you stand out, gives a reader a sense of you the person and not only what you're looking for, but what you think you can offer is the way to go.
Try writing it out by hand or in an email to yourself first, read it back and ask yourself if you'd meet you based on what you've written, and be brutally honest. Don't be afraid to look at other, verified, guys profiles for ideas or to get a sense of the kind of thing that might work for you.
Ultimately it's your profile and has to come from you though.
P.S. You might not think you're getting many looks, but a lot of women here look in stealth mode, which doesn't show on "Looked At Me" so you'd never know if they'd looked or not. |
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