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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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I'm in work, nothings happening just yet and I have time to watch the rain fall. So I thought I might write a small poem and if anyone else would like to have a go at putting their mind to work on a rain themed poem that'd be awesome 
Rain
You fall from great heights to land on my head,
Where you aiming for me? Or was it just luck instead?
You drop from my brow and onto my nose,
You soak me to the skin, right through my clothes.
I'm not mad at you rain, I quite like the feeling,
Your invigorating touch I find so appealing.
You liven me up as I run towards shelter,
Though I still curse your name and call you a melter.
I couldnt be without you rain, of that I'm quite sure,
If you never fell again I couldn't possibly endure.
Though I welcome the heat that comes with the sun,
Sun without rain would be no balance and no fun.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Rain rain go away come again another day I've got washing to put out!
On a serious note I liked yours a lot  X "
Thank you
I like yours too and I hope you get your washing out |
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I wrote this for Estella’s rain thread a couple of days ago
The clouds bruised and swollen,
Bloated with pain
The heavens divide and open
And down pours the rain
Beating relentlessly on the rooftops below
Torrents through gutters and pipes do flow
Gushing and sloshing rapidly through the drains
Rushing yet washing our sorrows away
The cold front soon clears and clouds do relent
Shafts of sunlight, reflections prismatically bent
Mist rising off fences back up to the sky
Pavements now steaming as the wet surface dries
Warmth replaces the hurt of a heart once broken
The sun rays whispering in a voice softly spoken
Never forget when your feeling in pain
There’ll always be sunshine, after the rain.
Courtesy of YOWD Brainfarts ©™ |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"I wrote this for Estella’s rain thread a couple of days ago
The clouds bruised and swollen,
Bloated with pain
The heavens divide and open
And down pours the rain
Beating relentlessly on the rooftops below
Torrents through gutters and pipes do flow
Gushing and sloshing rapidly through the drains
Rushing yet washing our sorrows away
The cold front soon clears and clouds do relent
Shafts of sunlight, reflections prismatically bent
Mist rising off fences back up to the sky
Pavements now steaming as the wet surface dries
Warmth replaces the hurt of a heart once broken
The sun rays whispering in a voice softly spoken
Never forget when your feeling in pain
There’ll always be sunshine, after the rain.
Courtesy of YOWD Brainfarts ©™"
That's fantastic man! A very well written poem |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I wrote this for Estella’s rain thread a couple of days ago
The clouds bruised and swollen,
Bloated with pain
The heavens divide and open
And down pours the rain
Beating relentlessly on the rooftops below
Torrents through gutters and pipes do flow
Gushing and sloshing rapidly through the drains
Rushing yet washing our sorrows away
The cold front soon clears and clouds do relent
Shafts of sunlight, reflections prismatically bent
Mist rising off fences back up to the sky
Pavements now steaming as the wet surface dries
Warmth replaces the hurt of a heart once broken
The sun rays whispering in a voice softly spoken
Never forget when your feeling in pain
There’ll always be sunshine, after the rain.
Courtesy of YOWD Brainfarts ©™
That's fantastic man! A very well written poem "
Thanks - yours was really good too |
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