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By *hilloutMan
over a year ago
All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest |
You more and better pictures. The text needs more development and perhaps should better describe you and what you can bring to the table. I'd probably lose the "like to take instruction" line, but that's just my opinion. Massive room for improvement atm. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"You more and better pictures. The text needs more development and perhaps should better describe you and what you can bring to the table. I'd probably lose the "like to take instruction" line, but that's just my opinion. Massive room for improvement atm."
Cheers mate, thanks for the advice rather than just criticism |
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By *hilloutMan
over a year ago
All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest |
"You more and better pictures. The text needs more development and perhaps should better describe you and what you can bring to the table. I'd probably lose the "like to take instruction" line, but that's just my opinion. Massive room for improvement atm.
Cheers mate, thanks for the advice rather than just criticism "
No worries. Though criticism can often be useful advice in itself  |
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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago
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"You more and better pictures. The text needs more development and perhaps should better describe you and what you can bring to the table. I'd probably lose the "like to take instruction" line, but that's just my opinion. Massive room for improvement atm.
Cheers mate, thanks for the advice rather than just criticism "
OP..you asked for opinion on your profile, and advice on how to improve it.
If you don't like the answers, don't ask the question.. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"So many profiles focus on being normal - how boring - and only what they want not what they are offering.
Could sum up man profiles like this :
Normal man wants a fuck , not fussy "
Lots to think on, thanks |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Apologies I missed your advice, I will re read and apply what you said
I gave you my opinion, as asked for in your original post.
You're welcome."
Thank you, I have changed a bit and will try to be less dull. What catches your eye, if I may ask? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Yawn, boring!!
It's so dull, bland and generic.
Honestly, you are aware this is an adult oriented site, yes?
So much beating about the bush in your profile that you fail to actually give anything away.
It just comes across that you're aiming to appeal to everybody and will sleep with anybody.
Next! |
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By *hilloutMan
over a year ago
All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest |
Your profile text is better than before but still needs to be less generic and more personalised.
I'd probably change "If this sounds good please feel free to send a friend invite or message to say hi" to "if this appeals i'd love to hear from you" or something similar. No one really sends friend requests just by looking at a profile. |
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