I'd give it 6-7.
Maybe break it up a little so it's not a bunch of sentences together, without paragraphs.
Asking for face pics without offering swap or having on profile is also not great.
Other than that, pretty good.
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"I'd give it 6-7.
Maybe break it up a little so it's not a bunch of sentences together, without paragraphs.
Asking for face pics without offering swap or having on profile is also not great.
Other than that, pretty good.
Happy Fabbing "
Thank you for advice, I've changed it a bit now. |
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By *ease_EMan
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"I'd give it 6-7.
Maybe break it up a little so it's not a bunch of sentences together, without paragraphs.
Asking for face pics without offering swap or having on profile is also not great.
Other than that, pretty good.
Happy Fabbing Thank you for advice, I've changed it a bit now. "
7-8
Second paragraph, you seem to be saying the same thing 2 different ways, with 5 sentences.
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"Dont mind anybody on here your profile is perfect....9/10....maybe you should put a face pic in your public pix ?"
If it was perfect why did you not rate it 10/10? |
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"Yes much better now.
Pics are good but get rid of the blurry 11 June one (or tell Mrs McMuffin to go slower for pics  )"
lol.. I'll pass that onto her.  pic is gone now. |
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"Dont mind anybody on here your profile is perfect....9/10....maybe you should put a face pic in your public pix ?"
A face pic? You've no face pic in your public gallery, why do you suggest showing one?  |
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Ok this is gonna sound critical but u have asked & plus profiles are v important for me when choosing a meet so I'm only trying to be helpful:
U have that your looking for women, couples on your 'looking for' box & not men but in your 1st paragraph u state your Ok with single guys.
Ur 3paragraphs are structurally messy, u used each 1 to say what ur looking for & then each with the 'social meeting 1st & see what happens' etc. It's repetitive, we get u want a social 1st so why say it 3times. Its also unclear on ur requirements e.g. So do u require face pics just with single guys? & I wouldn't even bother with the 'blocking' because they'll not see it anyways.
I'd give it 5/10 as it's not clear what your requirements are & apart from u want a social, ur genuine & uv busy lives, (like every1 else here) it doesn't say anything much about u guys. |
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"Ok this is gonna sound critical but u have asked & plus profiles are v important for me when choosing a meet so I'm only trying to be helpful:
U have that your looking for women, couples on your 'looking for' box & not men but in your 1st paragraph u state your Ok with single guys.
Ur 3paragraphs are structurally messy, u used each 1 to say what ur looking for & then each with the 'social meeting 1st & see what happens' etc. It's repetitive, we get u want a social 1st so why say it 3times. Its also unclear on ur requirements e.g. So do u require face pics just with single guys? & I wouldn't even bother with the 'blocking' because they'll not see it anyways.
I'd give it 5/10 as it's not clear what your requirements are & apart from u want a social, ur genuine & uv busy lives, (like every1 else here) it doesn't say anything much about u guys. "
Not critical at all..I asked and you're only telling the truth. I'll see what I can change on it. Thanks for the advice. |
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"So we are going to give this a go, just for the craic..rate our profile 1-10. Let us know if anything we should change or keep. "
I'd delete the 3rd para and exclude any reference to blocking it doesn't promote you as a couple in a great light. |
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"So we are going to give this a go, just for the craic..rate our profile 1-10. Let us know if anything we should change or keep.
I'd delete the 3rd para and exclude any reference to blocking it doesn't promote you as a couple in a great light."
Done already, thank you for letting us know. |
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