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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You use the words fun and laughter twice in your opening sentence matey - would maybe rejig that?
Ps - don't judge me as a grammar nazi - it just stood out to me when reading it! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"You use the words fun and laughter twice in your opening sentence matey - would maybe rejig that?
Ps - don't judge me as a grammar nazi - it just stood out to me when reading it! " cheers I didn't really know what to put in there |
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