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Keats is Dead so Fuck me From Behind
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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By Hera Lindsay Bird
Keats is dead so fuck me from behind
Slowly and with carnal purpose
Some black midwinter afternoon
While all the children are walking home from school
Peel my stockings down with your teeth
Coleridge is dead and Auden too
Of laughing in an overcoat
Shelley died at sea and his heart wouldn’t burn
& Wordsworth……………………………………………..
They never found his body
His widow mad with grief, hammering nails into an empty meadow
Byron, Whitman, our dog crushed by the garage door
Finger me slowly
In the snowscape of your childhood
Our dead floating just below the surface of the earth
Bend me over like a substitute teacher
& pump me full of shivering arrows
O emotional vulnerability
Bosnian folk-song, birds in the chimney
Tell me what you love when you think I’m not listening
Wallace Stevens’s mother is calling him in for dinner
But he’s not coming, he’s dead too, he died sixty years ago
And nobody cared at his funeral
Life is real
And the days burn off like leopard print
Nobody, not even the dead can tell me what to do
Eat my pussy from behind
Bill Manhire’s not getting any younger
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Finger me slowly in the snowscape of your childhood" is the phrase that jumps out for me - what's wrong with the back of tesco?
(Also, just to clarify, not my work. New Zealand's hottest new poet, apparently) |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it"
....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite...
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By (user no longer on site)
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"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite..."
......shite..
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By (user no longer on site)
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"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite.........shite.."
Don't sit on the fence here Warrior Queen , just tell us how you really think of it  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"First time I read it I thought it was utter, laugh out loud shite, but it's kinda grown on me... it's not ee cummings but I like it....One direction can also grow on you...its still ahite.........shite..
Don't sit on the fence here Warrior Queen , just tell us how you really think of it "
..ok..no more sugar coating it..  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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Even the greats die, no matter how good. So fuck it - and fuck her as well! Death defining life, and life is just sex maybe?
Don't know about Picasso in the style of Rolf Harris... but Id be in interested in Rolf Harris in the style of Picasso! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Even the greats die, no matter how good. So fuck it - and fuck her as well! Death defining life, and life is just sex maybe?
Don't know about Picasso in the style of Rolf Harris... but Id be in interested in Rolf Harris in the style of Picasso!"
...it reminds me of those "theatre groups" in the 80s..who read out mindless drivel while naked. Take the sexual references out of this, and read it again. ..even with the fuck words in..its indecipherable. |
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By *oghunter33Woman
over a year ago
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"The whole thing is about sex and death... wouldn't really work without the sex stuff..."
Neither would it the other way around. Then does it work as a whole? The thin line between life and death, pulse and corpse, carnage and pain everywhere bla bla bla, I prefer to look at a Picasso and have a wank. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Lets just hope she/he stays in the southern hemisphere. ..."
She has a poem called Monica... way too long to copy and paste here, and links are frowned upon... but I'd love to hear your thoughts! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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It's interesting for sure. It's hard to judge a poet on just one of his work's. If we took just of years or Patrick kavanaghs work's on its on merit not knowing who it was by we would probably say it was pure shite. Put a name to it and we gush praise. Yeah screw it, I like it |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Lets just hope she/he stays in the southern hemisphere. ...
She has a poem called Monica... way too long to copy and paste here, and links are frowned upon... but I'd love to hear your thoughts! "
Read it. There's something about her writing that I like. Not all of it, but an odd sentence here and there throughout gets to me.
Thanks for the introduction |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Where do you get the stuff he is smoking or drinking?
Im guessing she gets it in New Zealand... is it really that bizzare?"
...if any of my kids handed that up as a project. ..id be calling social services. . |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Where do you get the stuff he is smoking or drinking?
Im guessing she gets it in New Zealand... is it really that bizzare?...if any of my kids handed that up as a project. ..id be calling social services. . "
I think they'd be calling you |
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