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Is this the most descriptive and probably the best sexual poem ever?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

In 1965, W.H. Auden anonymously published a one-poem pamphlet that contained his brilliant "The Platonic Blow", a graphic description of a sexual encounter between two men (Until 1967, male gay sex was illegal in the UK.).

"The Platonic Blow" by W.H. Auden

It was a spring day, a day for a lay, when the air

Smelled like a locker-room, a day to blow or get blown;

Returning from lunch I turned my corner and there

On a near-by stoop I saw him standing alone.

I glanced as I advanced. The clean white T-shirt outlined

A forceful torso, the light-blue denims divulged

Much. I observed the snug curves where they hugged the behind,

I watched the crotch where the cloth intriguingly bulged.

Our eyes met. I felt sick. My knees turned weak.

I couldn't move. I didn't know what to say.

In a blur I heard words, myself like a stranger speak

"Will you come to my room?" Then a husky voice, "O.K."

I produced some beer and we talked. Like a little boy

He told me his story. Present address: next door.

Half Polish, half Irish. The youngest. From Illinois.

Profession: mechanic. Name: Bud. Age: twenty-four.

He put down his glass and stretched his bare arms along

The back of my sofa. The afternoon sunlight struck

The blond hairs on the wrist near my head. His chin was strong.

His mouth sucky. I could hardly believe my luck.

And here he was sitting beside me, legs apart.

I could bear it no longer. I touched the inside of his thigh.

His reply was to move closer. I trembled, my heart

Thumped and jumped as my fingers went to his fly.

I opened a gap in the flap. I went in there.

I sought for a slit in the gripper shorts that had charge

Of the basket I asked for. I came to warm flesh then to hair.

I went on. I found what I hoped. I groped. It was large.

He responded to my fondling in a charming, disarming way:

Without a word he unbuckled his belt while I felt.

And lolled back, stretching his legs. His pants fell away.

Carefully drawing it out, I beheld what I held.

The circumcised head was a work of mastercraft

With perfectly beveled rim of unusual weight

And the friendliest red. Even relaxed, the shaft

Was of noble dimensions with the wrinkles that indicate

Singular powers of extension. For a second or two,

It lay there inert, then suddenly stirred in my hand,

Then paused as if frightened or doubtful of what to do.

And then with a violent jerk began to expand.

By soundless bounds it extended and distended, by quick

Great leaps it rose, it flushed, it rushed to its full size.

Nearly nine inches long and three inches thick,

A royal column, ineffably solemn and wise.

I tested its length and strength with a manual squeeze.

I bunched my fingers and twirled them about the knob.

I stroked it from top to bottom. I got on my knees.

I lowered my head. I opened my mouth for the job.

But he pushed me gently away. He bent down. He unlaced

His shoes. He removed his socks. Stood up. Shed

His pants altogether. Muscles in arms and waist

Rippled as he whipped his T-shirt over his head.

I scanned his tan, enjoyed the contrast of brown

Trunk against white shorts taut around small

Hips. With a dig and a wriggle he peeled them down.

I tore off my clothes. He faced me, smiling. I saw all.

The gorgeous organ stood stiffly and straightly out

With a slight flare upwards. At each beat of his heart it threw

An odd little nod my way. From the slot of the spout

Exuded a drop of transparent viscous goo.

The lair of hair was fair, the grove of a young man,

A tangle of curls and whorls, luxuriant but couth.

Except for a spur of golden hairs that fan

To the neat navel, the rest of the belly was smooth.

Well hung, slung from the fork of the muscular legs,

The firm vase of his sperm, like a bulging pear,

Cradling its handsome glands, two herculean eggs,

Swung as he came towards me, shameless, bare.

We aligned mouths. We entwined. All act was clutch,

All fact contact, the attack and the interlock

Of tongues, the charms of arms. I shook at the touch

Of his fresh flesh, I rocked at the shock of his cock.

Straddling my legs a little I inserted his divine

Person between and closed on it tight as I could.

The upright warmth of his belly lay all along mine.

Nude, glued together for a minute, we stood.

I stroked the lobes of his ears, the back of his head

And the broad shoulders. I took bold hold of the compact

Globes of his bottom. We tottered. He fell on the bed.

Lips parted, eyes closed, he lay there, ripe for the act.

Mad to be had, to be felt and smelled. My lips

Explored the adorable masculine tits. My eyes

Assessed the chest. I caressed the athletic hips

And the slim limbs. I approved the grooves of the thighs.

I hugged, I snuggled into an armpit. I sniffed

The subtle whiff of its tuft. I lapped up the taste

Of its hot hollow. My fingers began to drift

On a trek of inspection, a leisurely tour of the waist.

Downward in narrowing circles they playfully strayed.

Encroached on his privates like poachers, approached the prick,

But teasingly swerved, retreated from meeting. It betrayed

Its pleading need by a pretty imploring kick.

"Shall I rim you?" I whispered. He shifted his limbs in assent.

Turned on his side and opened his legs, let me pass

To the dark parts behind. I kissed as I went

The great thick cord that ran back from his balls to his arse.

Prying the buttocks aside, I nosed my way in

Down the shaggy slopes. I came to the puckered goal.

It was quick to my licking. He pressed his crotch to my chin.

His thighs squirmed as my tongue wormed in his hole.

His sensations yearned for consummation. He untucked

His legs and lay panting, hot as a teen-age boy.

Naked, enlarged, charged, aching to get sucked,

Clawing the sheet, all his pores open to joy.

I inspected his erection. I surveyed his parts with a stare

From scrotum level. Sighting along the underside

Of his cock, I looked through the forest of pubic hair

To the range of the chest beyond rising lofty and wide.

I admired the texture, the delicate wrinkles and the neat

Sutures of the capacious bag. I adored the grace

Of the male genitalia. I raised the delicious meat

Up to my mouth, brought the face of its hard-on to my face.

Slipping my lips round the Byzantine dome of the head,

With the tip of my tongue I caressed the sensitive groove.

He thrilled to the trill. "That's lovely!" he hoarsely said.

"Go on! Go on!" Very slowly I started to move.

Gently, intently, I slid to the massive base

Of his tower of power, paused there a moment down

In the warm moist thicket, then began to retrace

Inch by inch the smooth way to the throbbing crown.

Indwelling excitements swelled at delights to come

As I descended and ascended those thick distended walls.

I grasped his root between left forefinger and thumb

And with my right hand tickled his heavy voluminous balls.

I plunged with a rhythmical lunge steady and slow,

And at every stroke made a corkscrew roll with my tongue.

His soul reeled in the feeling. He whimpered "Oh!"

As I tongued and squeezed and rolled and tickled and swung.

Then I pressed on the spot where the groin is joined to the cock,

Slipped a finger into his arse and massaged him from inside.

The secret sluices of his juices began to unlock.

He melted into what he felt. "O Jesus!" he cried.

Waves of immeasurable pleasures mounted his member in quick

Spasms. I lay still in the notch of his crotch inhaling his sweat.

His ring convulsed round my finger. Into me, rich and thick,

His hot spunk spouted in gouts, spurted in jet after jet.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Way too long to even read.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

That is brilliant! I dont usualy read something that long first thing in the morning, but that was well worth it.

Im not really into stories or poems etc and this i have to say has been the best i have ever seen.

Thanks for sharing XX

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Well i read it...love old written literature never seen gay/bisexual male porn before tho....i think its hot!

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

To those who think it's too long,

{It's not if you read it}

This famous saying by Julius Caesar should entice your needs??

" I CAME ,I Saw,I Conquered "

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Brilliant

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

all sounded a bit gay to me

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

very hot indeed!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Good, very descriptive, but i didn't really like the rhyme in it. The only other poem of his i know of is the one about the funeral. Not even sure what's called, but it starts off with 'Stop all the clocks'. First time i heard it was in the film 'Four weddings and a funeral'. Made me cry.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

absolutely fantastic

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By *omcattyMan  over a year ago

Local

not in the Seamus Heaney league, in fact it's mush,,rubbish,,junk,,a jumble of unmatched crap

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"not in the Seamus Heaney league, in fact it's mush,,rubbish,,junk,,a jumble of unmatched crap "

I suppose we all have our own opinion,however he's not one of the greatest poets who ever lived for nothing.

Oh and for poetry to be good it doesn't have to match.

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By *omcattyMan  over a year ago

Local


"not in the Seamus Heaney league, in fact it's mush,,rubbish,,junk,,a jumble of unmatched crap

I suppose we all have our own opinion,however he's not one of the greatest poets who ever lived for nothing.

Oh and for poetry to be good it doesn't have to match."

I recommend some Chomsky,,,

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"To those who think it's too long,

{It's not if you read it}

This famous saying by Julius Caesar should entice your needs??

" I CAME ,I Saw,I Conquered "

"

its way too long for something that boring.....sorry bit shitty lol

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Love it!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"In 1965, W.H. Auden anonymously published a one-poem pamphlet that contained his brilliant "The Platonic Blow", a graphic description of a sexual encounter between two men (Until 1967, male gay sex was illegal in the UK.).

"The Platonic Blow" by W.H. Auden

It was a spring day, a day for a lay, when the air

Smelled like a locker-room, a day to blow or get blown;

Returning from lunch I turned my corner and there

On a near-by stoop I saw him standing alone.

I glanced as I advanced. The clean white T-shirt outlined

A forceful torso, the light-blue denims divulged

Much. I observed the snug curves where they hugged the behind,

I watched the crotch where the cloth intriguingly bulged.

Our eyes met. I felt sick. My knees turned weak.

I couldn't move. I didn't know what to say.

In a blur I heard words, myself like a stranger speak

"Will you come to my room?" Then a husky voice, "O.K."

I produced some beer and we talked. Like a little boy

He told me his story. Present address: next door.

Half Polish, half Irish. The youngest. From Illinois.

Profession: mechanic. Name: Bud. Age: twenty-four.

He put down his glass and stretched his bare arms along

The back of my sofa. The afternoon sunlight struck

The blond hairs on the wrist near my head. His chin was strong.

His mouth sucky. I could hardly believe my luck.

And here he was sitting beside me, legs apart.

I could bear it no longer. I touched the inside of his thigh.

His reply was to move closer. I trembled, my heart

Thumped and jumped as my fingers went to his fly.

I opened a gap in the flap. I went in there.

I sought for a slit in the gripper shorts that had charge

Of the basket I asked for. I came to warm flesh then to hair.

I went on. I found what I hoped. I groped. It was large.

He responded to my fondling in a charming, disarming way:

Without a word he unbuckled his belt while I felt.

And lolled back, stretching his legs. His pants fell away.

Carefully drawing it out, I beheld what I held.

The circumcised head was a work of mastercraft

With perfectly beveled rim of unusual weight

And the friendliest red. Even relaxed, the shaft

Was of noble dimensions with the wrinkles that indicate

Singular powers of extension. For a second or two,

It lay there inert, then suddenly stirred in my hand,

Then paused as if frightened or doubtful of what to do.

And then with a violent jerk began to expand.

By soundless bounds it extended and distended, by quick

Great leaps it rose, it flushed, it rushed to its full size.

Nearly nine inches long and three inches thick,

A royal column, ineffably solemn and wise.

I tested its length and strength with a manual squeeze.

I bunched my fingers and twirled them about the knob.

I stroked it from top to bottom. I got on my knees.

I lowered my head. I opened my mouth for the job.

But he pushed me gently away. He bent down. He unlaced

His shoes. He removed his socks. Stood up. Shed

His pants altogether. Muscles in arms and waist

Rippled as he whipped his T-shirt over his head.

I scanned his tan, enjoyed the contrast of brown

Trunk against white shorts taut around small

Hips. With a dig and a wriggle he peeled them down.

I tore off my clothes. He faced me, smiling. I saw all.

The gorgeous organ stood stiffly and straightly out

With a slight flare upwards. At each beat of his heart it threw

An odd little nod my way. From the slot of the spout

Exuded a drop of transparent viscous goo.

The lair of hair was fair, the grove of a young man,

A tangle of curls and whorls, luxuriant but couth.

Except for a spur of golden hairs that fan

To the neat navel, the rest of the belly was smooth.

Well hung, slung from the fork of the muscular legs,

The firm vase of his sperm, like a bulging pear,

Cradling its handsome glands, two herculean eggs,

Swung as he came towards me, shameless, bare.

We aligned mouths. We entwined. All act was clutch,

All fact contact, the attack and the interlock

Of tongues, the charms of arms. I shook at the touch

Of his fresh flesh, I rocked at the shock of his cock.

Straddling my legs a little I inserted his divine

Person between and closed on it tight as I could.

The upright warmth of his belly lay all along mine.

Nude, glued together for a minute, we stood.

I stroked the lobes of his ears, the back of his head

And the broad shoulders. I took bold hold of the compact

Globes of his bottom. We tottered. He fell on the bed.

Lips parted, eyes closed, he lay there, ripe for the act.

Mad to be had, to be felt and smelled. My lips

Explored the adorable masculine tits. My eyes

Assessed the chest. I caressed the athletic hips

And the slim limbs. I approved the grooves of the thighs.

I hugged, I snuggled into an armpit. I sniffed

The subtle whiff of its tuft. I lapped up the taste

Of its hot hollow. My fingers began to drift

On a trek of inspection, a leisurely tour of the waist.

Downward in narrowing circles they playfully strayed.

Encroached on his privates like poachers, approached the prick,

But teasingly swerved, retreated from meeting. It betrayed

Its pleading need by a pretty imploring kick.

"Shall I rim you?" I whispered. He shifted his limbs in assent.

Turned on his side and opened his legs, let me pass

To the dark parts behind. I kissed as I went

The great thick cord that ran back from his balls to his arse.

Prying the buttocks aside, I nosed my way in

Down the shaggy slopes. I came to the puckered goal.

It was quick to my licking. He pressed his crotch to my chin.

His thighs squirmed as my tongue wormed in his hole.

His sensations yearned for consummation. He untucked

His legs and lay panting, hot as a teen-age boy.

Naked, enlarged, charged, aching to get sucked,

Clawing the sheet, all his pores open to joy.

I inspected his erection. I surveyed his parts with a stare

From scrotum level. Sighting along the underside

Of his cock, I looked through the forest of pubic hair

To the range of the chest beyond rising lofty and wide.

I admired the texture, the delicate wrinkles and the neat

Sutures of the capacious bag. I adored the grace

Of the male genitalia. I raised the delicious meat

Up to my mouth, brought the face of its hard-on to my face.

Slipping my lips round the Byzantine dome of the head,

With the tip of my tongue I caressed the sensitive groove.

He thrilled to the trill. "That's lovely!" he hoarsely said.

"Go on! Go on!" Very slowly I started to move.

Gently, intently, I slid to the massive base

Of his tower of power, paused there a moment down

In the warm moist thicket, then began to retrace

Inch by inch the smooth way to the throbbing crown.

Indwelling excitements swelled at delights to come

As I descended and ascended those thick distended walls.

I grasped his root between left forefinger and thumb

And with my right hand tickled his heavy voluminous balls.

I plunged with a rhythmical lunge steady and slow,

And at every stroke made a corkscrew roll with my tongue.

His soul reeled in the feeling. He whimpered "Oh!"

As I tongued and squeezed and rolled and tickled and swung.

Then I pressed on the spot where the groin is joined to the cock,

Slipped a finger into his arse and massaged him from inside.

The secret sluices of his juices began to unlock.

He melted into what he felt. "O Jesus!" he cried.

Waves of immeasurable pleasures mounted his member in quick

Spasms. I lay still in the notch of his crotch inhaling his sweat.

His ring convulsed round my finger. Into me, rich and thick,

His hot spunk spouted in gouts, spurted in jet after jet."

if it was annomos how do u know he wrote it

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Love erotic literature. Really turns me on... Even tho this is about 2 guys. Still find it arousing...had to read all of it. Couldnt stop. Beginning is bettee than the end....

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

" if it was annomos how do u know he wrote it " Jack De Lad.

If he didn't PUBLISH it anonymously he would have been arrested....just as you should be for your spelling

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Love erotic literature. Really turns me on... Even tho this is about 2 guys. Still find it arousing...had to read all of it. Couldnt stop. Beginning is bettee than the end...."

Yeah i totally agree with you even though it's not my bag {two guys} pardon the pun. It's just something you have to finish once you start...very simple yet burning hot.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"" if it was annomos how do u know he wrote it " Jack De Lad.

If he didn't PUBLISH it anonymously he would have been arrested....just as you should be for your spelling "

He actually wrote it and published it privately in 1948

It was only when it was published without his permission in 1965 that he openly admitted it was written by him. However when it was republished ( again without his permission) in 1970 he repudiated authorship

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I liked it. Would have preferred if he had shaved his forest of pubic hair though. Kinda gets in the teeth.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

HOT!

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By *avie tCouple  over a year ago

otherside of nowhere

must say i liked that....dont think it matters that its two men not to me anyway......its just very erotic(mrs _avie t)

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"" if it was annomos how do u know he wrote it " Jack De Lad.

If he didn't PUBLISH it anonymously he would have been arrested....just as you should be for your spelling "

bad spelling is a turn off. Articulate intelligent vocabulary is a turn on!

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"" if it was annomos how do u know he wrote it " Jack De Lad.

If he didn't PUBLISH it anonymously he would have been arrested....just as you should be for your spelling bad spelling is a turn off. Articulate intelligent vocabulary is a turn on!"

I definitely agree with you there Dutch Gold as bad spelling and text speak for me go hand in hand... i hate it.

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By *ichael McCarthyMan  over a year ago

Lucan

Not everyone is gifted with the ability to spell well though. There are many and varied reasons for poor spelling so let's not judge people on the basis of spelling alone.

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By *ichael McCarthyMan  over a year ago

Lucan

As for the poem, it didn't do it for me, although I did find myself clenching my pretty little bum cheeks rather tightly during it!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"" if it was annomos how do u know he wrote it " Jack De Lad.

If he didn't PUBLISH it anonymously he would have been arrested....just as you should be for your spelling bad spelling is a turn off. Articulate intelligent vocabulary is a turn on!

I definitely agree with you there Dutcht Gold as bad spelling and text speak for me go hand in hand... i hate it."

get of yer high horses ..... Jes it seems intelligent vocabulary and manners can be miles apart for some peeps eh

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"" if it was annomos how do u know he wrote it " Jack De Lad.

If he didn't PUBLISH it anonymously he would have been arrested....just as you should be for your spelling "

so basicly u havnt a clu if he actully wrote it!!!!!

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By *ichael McCarthyMan  over a year ago

Lucan

I've read much better. My favourite erotic poem is about a girl named Mary...

.

.

Mary had a little lamb.

It had a massive willy.

It hung right down between his legs,

And made him look quite silly.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Mines

Old mother hubbard

Went to the cupboard

To fetch poor rover a bone

But when she bent over

Up came poor rover

And gave her a bone of his own

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Little miss muffet

sat on her tuffet

stuffin her cake hole all day

along came a spider

sat down beside her

and the fat bitch ate him too

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By *omcattyMan  over a year ago

Local

have to say the poems above are stunning in there vocabulary and composition,,,well done lads someone shd open a poets thread

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By *ichael McCarthyMan  over a year ago

Lucan


"have to say the poems above are stunning in there vocabulary and composition,,,well done lads someone shd open a poets thread "

If you open it, they will post!

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