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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West

Not every one writes like Byron or cares to.

And we all have our taste and opinion

If you would like feedback on your bio or would like to give someone someone feedback or share what you v like in a bio then join in and interact with anyone in the thread.

Remember that everyone's opinion is just one point of view.

If you ask, strap in.

If you share, be kind.

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By *otorman20021Man  over a year ago

East Cork

Always open to suggestions or ideas on my bio, any and all welcome.

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By *adger BrocMan  over a year ago

Co. Cork


"Not every one writes like Byron or cares to.

And we all have our taste and opinion

If you would like feedback on your bio or would like to give someone someone feedback or share what you v like in a bio then join in and interact with anyone in the thread.

Remember that everyone's opinion is just one point of view.

If you ask, strap in.

If you share, be kind.

"

Yours is quite good.

Gets the job done efficiently and effectively.

Everyone loves the icecream man.

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Always open to suggestions or ideas on my bio, any and all welcome. "

Pretty decent bio in my mind.

I hope you don't mind. I edited out all the bits I feel you don't benefit from having.

I reckon if you added a sentence about the kind of things that attract you and a one about what you can might bring to someone's experience you'd be all set.

"Single very respectable and respectful male looking for some like minded company in my life.

Nothing nicer than a coffee and a chat to finish off the day especially in the right company.

I have all my own hair (not all the same colour) and teeth and I chew with my mouth closed.

If interested, send me a message and we will take it from there. Can accommodate sometimes."

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By *otorman20021Man  over a year ago

East Cork

Thanks for the suggestions, I will work on it

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By *igglefunWoman  over a year ago

Cork

I'm open to suggestions

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"I'm open to suggestions "

Hello friend.

I will generalise here so please take it as just from my experience with fab

Some women's profiles don't have a lot of time put into them and can be demanding because they get so many messages they don't really have to try.

I might politely suggest that you may be missing out on a certain calibre of man that has a natural curiousity about who are and might just pass by a profile that demands a face pic up front.

xx

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By *igglefunWoman  over a year ago

Cork


"I'm open to suggestions

Hello friend.

I will generalise here so please take it as just from my experience with fab

Some women's profiles don't have a lot of time put into them and can be demanding because they get so many messages they don't really have to try.

I might politely suggest that you may be missing out on a certain calibre of man that has a natural curiousity about who are and might just pass by a profile that demands a face pic up front.

xx

"

Why thank u kind sir...

I'll sit down later and have a rethink

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Hmm I wonder is there any Bio ghost writers here that could write one for me

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Hmm I wonder is there any Bio ghost writers here that could write one for me "

Just write one now!

Don't even think about it. Just speed write a bio

Who you are

What you're like

What you are looking for

Something unique to you.

Do it! Post it here when your done and you'll get great feedback

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I’d be happy for some constructive criticism

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By *otownkid1967Man  over a year ago

Portlaoise

Yeah, be good to get feed back.

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By *adger BrocMan  over a year ago

Co. Cork

Always room for improvement.

Happy to receive comments, good or bad.

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By *ingpot!Man  over a year ago

West Cork

Go on, curious what y'all have to say as I've not had a solo profile here before

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West

Help each other out too guys folk's!

Or just post what you like to see in a great bio male or female!

What gets your attention?

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Go on, curious what y'all have to say as I've not had a solo profile here before "

This is to my mind (and taste) as near to perfect as can be.

Your friendly open and honest personality shines through!

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By *heBlowinsCouple  over a year ago

West Cork


"Help each other out too guys folk's!

Or just post what you like to see in a great bio male or female!

What gets your attention?"

Good point OP

For us, the more info the better. Letting your personality shine through a bit and showing well lit and interesting pics make you stand out over the majority.

Writing two words and having 10 shots of your dick from the same angle (or even different angles) is just boring and samey.

It doesn't go unnoticed when people delete old pics if they're replacing them with similar pics.

The biggest thing we look for is what YOU'RE looking for - "fill in later" or "ask me anything" is too much work

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By *s LollyWoman  over a year ago

The pub then supermacs ...

Haha this should be fun fire away

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Help each other out too guys folk's!

Or just post what you like to see in a great bio male or female!

What gets your attention?

Good point OP

For us, the more info the better. Letting your personality shine through a bit and showing well lit and interesting pics make you stand out over the majority.

Writing two words and having 10 shots of your dick from the same angle (or even different angles) is just boring and samey.

It doesn't go unnoticed when people delete old pics if they're replacing them with similar pics.

The biggest thing we look for is what YOU'RE looking for - "fill in later" or "ask me anything" is too much work "

Let's try to keep it to bios if we can. Photos can be another thread.

This is the Fab Bio Lab !

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By *abrielle43Woman  over a year ago

Kildare

I'm happy for feedback, tried not to have demands, maybe short on what I can offer?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Open to suggestions/changes to ours…

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Hmm I wonder is there any Bio ghost writers here that could write one for me

Just write one now!

Don't even think about it. Just speed write a bio

Who you are

What you're like

What you are looking for

Something unique to you.

Do it! Post it here when your done and you'll get great feedback "

There, I threw something together

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Yeah, be good to get feed back."

Yours is very clear with plenty of info and I think gives the impression of you that you want it to.

Maybe some paragraphs and punctuation? Good grammar is hot

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Hmm I wonder is there any Bio ghost writers here that could write one for me

Just write one now!

Don't even think about it. Just speed write a bio

Who you are

What you're like

What you are looking for

Something unique to you.

Do it! Post it here when your done and you'll get great feedback

There, I threw something together"

Dude that's really good work!

Fair play to you.

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By *ro_boner_publicoMan  over a year ago

North County


"The biggest thing we look for is what YOU'RE looking for - "fill in later" or "ask me anything" is too much work "

Fantastic feedback from an examiner with specific expertise my field of interest!

I've tried to include more about my typical partners.

If you had the time to glance over my profile and share any insights that come to mind, I would be very grateful.

I just finished a big project and finally have some time to relax! Plan to update my profile and have some fun

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By *cskinnyMan  over a year ago

near you

Im up for it. Any feedback is good

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By *panishRebelMan  over a year ago

Alicante Spain, and Cork City Ireland

Yep, always good to get feedback

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Hmm I wonder is there any Bio ghost writers here that could write one for me

Just write one now!

Don't even think about it. Just speed write a bio

Who you are

What you're like

What you are looking for

Something unique to you.

Do it! Post it here when your done and you'll get great feedback

There, I threw something together

Dude that's really good work!

Fair play to you."

Really? Thanks for posting this thread and giving me a catalyst to actually write something

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By *otorman20021Man  over a year ago

East Cork


"Thanks for the suggestions, I will work on it "

Thanks for the input, will you take another look at mine and see is it any improvement

I’m finding the “what I bring to the table” hard to write.

I also don’t want to leave out the last parts because when I have it there, people I’m not looking for click on my profile but at least they don’t engage and I would rather keep it that way!

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By *ingpot!Man  over a year ago

West Cork


"Go on, curious what y'all have to say as I've not had a solo profile here before

This is to my mind (and taste) as near to perfect as can be.

Your friendly open and honest personality shines through!"

Thanks delectable that genuinely means a lot

FWIW.. I and the Mrs. feel the same about yours

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By *heBlowinsCouple  over a year ago

West Cork


"Help each other out too guys folk's!

Or just post what you like to see in a great bio male or female!

What gets your attention?

Good point OP

For us, the more info the better. Letting your personality shine through a bit and showing well lit and interesting pics make you stand out over the majority.

Writing two words and having 10 shots of your dick from the same angle (or even different angles) is just boring and samey.

It doesn't go unnoticed when people delete old pics if they're replacing them with similar pics.

The biggest thing we look for is what YOU'RE looking for - "fill in later" or "ask me anything" is too much work

Let's try to keep it to bios if we can. Photos can be another thread.

This is the Fab Bio Lab !"

Fair! Always included the entire thing under "bio" but I suppose that would be "profile" and wasn't thinking.. thanks!

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Thanks for the suggestions, I will work on it

Thanks for the input, will you take another look at mine and see is it any improvement

I’m finding the “what I bring to the table” hard to write.

I also don’t want to leave out the last parts because when I have it there, people I’m not looking for click on my profile but at least they don’t engage and I would rather keep it that way!"

I honestly don't think you need this paragraph.

"I am 100% straight not “fab” straight so all the single guys, Tv-Ts and the likes sorry but I have no interest at all, thank you but no thank you.

Please WOMEN only or a MF couple, not interested in males on their own."

Just go to you privacy tab and turn on the filters for single males and tv/TS

That will block their messages and they won't show you in your views

The phrase "TV's and the likes" may come off a little off putting to some. It sounds a little dismissive.

Get rid of it!

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By *arrot_in_a_boxCouple  over a year ago

kinda dublin

Anyone wanna give feedback on my feedback, and get an invite feedback loop going?

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West

Guys can give feedback to guys, guys!

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By *inxySTV/TS  over a year ago

dublin

I would love to know what people think of mine. I always feel ones profile text is a great window into their personality. I never quiet know what to write without coming across as demented lol

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"The biggest thing we look for is what YOU'RE looking for - "fill in later" or "ask me anything" is too much work

Fantastic feedback from an examiner with specific expertise my field of interest!

I've tried to include more about my typical partners.

If you had the time to glance over my profile and share any insights that come to mind, I would be very grateful.

I just finished a big project and finally have some time to relax! Plan to update my profile and have some fun "

This is a complete bio as far as I can see. So much information presented in a clear and respectful way

A great example for any guy in here looking for inspiration. Myself included

Go look guys. He nailed and has the veri's to back it up.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I've not changed anything in my Bio in a very long time. It says who I am and what I'd like. I would like to refresh it so any help I'll take on board.

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"I've not changed anything in my Bio in a very long time. It says who I am and what I'd like. I would like to refresh it so any help I'll take on board. "

I made some small edits and added some paragraphs

"I am a fun married woman on a path to discovery with my husband's full permission.

My husband also has a profile here.

I'm a very sensual sexual woman with a fun loving personality and a secret wild side that yearns for nurturing by a strong dominant man.

I want to find a man of a similar mind who can make my pulse race and push me to my limits.

------

I don't think there is any point in the final bits telling guys what not to do. They don't listen anyway and it drags their bad juju into your happy place.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Thank you

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By *adger BrocMan  over a year ago

Co. Cork


"The biggest thing we look for is what YOU'RE looking for - "fill in later" or "ask me anything" is too much work

Fantastic feedback from an examiner with specific expertise my field of interest!

I've tried to include more about my typical partners.

If you had the time to glance over my profile and share any insights that come to mind, I would be very grateful.

I just finished a big project and finally have some time to relax! Plan to update my profile and have some fun "

Delete on of the "with's" in the video/fotos line and it will be perfect.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Would love some feedback!

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By *heBlowinsCouple  over a year ago

West Cork


"The biggest thing we look for is what YOU'RE looking for - "fill in later" or "ask me anything" is too much work

Fantastic feedback from an examiner with specific expertise my field of interest!

I've tried to include more about my typical partners.

If you had the time to glance over my profile and share any insights that come to mind, I would be very grateful.

I just finished a big project and finally have some time to relax! Plan to update my profile and have some fun "

Seconded what badger just said.. just that small grammatical error... otherwise, absolutely perfect my man

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By *igDesire2Couple  over a year ago

belfast

Oh go on then - it’s all helpful

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Oh go on then - it’s all helpful "

I would say, before any other feedback that might be useful to you, that you have a couples profile that is written solely about you.

It's a little disconcerting even though you mention the possible fuck buddy who there is no information about in your bio.

That's a great place to start.

That Sydney university thing is a total myth you might as well just get rid of it right away

That would be enough for me to pass by.

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By *igDesire2Couple  over a year ago

belfast


"Oh go on then - it’s all helpful

I would say, before any other feedback that might be useful to you, that you have a couples profile that is written solely about you.

It's a little disconcerting even though you mention the possible fuck buddy who there is no information about in your bio.

That's a great place to start.

That Sydney university thing is a total myth you might as well just get rid of it right away

That would be enough for me to pass by."

Thanks - it started as a couple profile and we went separate ways. Fab said they would change it to singles profile but still waiting.

Ah good to know about the Sydney thing. Thanks!

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By *heBlowinsCouple  over a year ago

West Cork


"Oh go on then - it’s all helpful "

Great bio! Just some friendly constructive critique:

The first person use of "I" is a bit confusing as you're a couple but presenting/playing as a single? A bit of clarification would be nice

This bit is unnecessary: "I’m not here to shag the site so won’t be saying yes to everyone - pls be aware."

I don't think it serves any real purpose and might be construed as negative and judgemental/slut shaming.

Please lose the "legal" paragraph at the end.. it has no actual legal bearing in real life.

That's it! Happy fabbing!

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By *heBlowinsCouple  over a year ago

West Cork

OP is too quick!

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By *igDesire2Couple  over a year ago

belfast


"Oh go on then - it’s all helpful

Great bio! Just some friendly constructive critique:

The first person use of "I" is a bit confusing as you're a couple but presenting/playing as a single? A bit of clarification would be nice

This bit is unnecessary: "I’m not here to shag the site so won’t be saying yes to everyone - pls be aware."

I don't think it serves any real purpose and might be construed as negative and judgemental/slut shaming.

Please lose the "legal" paragraph at the end.. it has no actual legal bearing in real life.

That's it! Happy fabbing! "

Thanks! Really appreciate it

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Not every one writes like Byron or cares to.

And we all have our taste and opinion

If you would like feedback on your bio or would like to give someone someone feedback or share what you v like in a bio then join in and interact with anyone in the thread.

Remember that everyone's opinion is just one point of view.

If you ask, strap in.

If you share, be kind.

"

Definitely up for some pointers

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By *ro_boner_publicoMan  over a year ago

North County

Excellent! Thank you all.

I'm a mess when it comes to phone-typing. Thanks again

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By *uriousVoyeurMan  over a year ago

Northside

A few tips would be no harm!!! (Said a fair few wimmin on fab )

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By *ilverjayMan  over a year ago

Meath

Will put my head above the paraphet

Could regret this

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By *affa31Woman  over a year ago

Galway

In cause I’m nosy

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By *affa31Woman  over a year ago

Galway


"A few tips would be no harm!!! (Said a fair few wimmin on fab ) "

Fairly decent profile imo. You let people know what you’re looking for, what you bring to the table and it seems honest. A more recent veri would probably be helpful but hope you find what you’re looking for!

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By *ornywife20Couple  over a year ago

North Cork

Always open to suggestions to improve ours.

In general if a bio looks like a long winded essay I pass . A few likes and dislike by all means good to know what they like .

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By *otownkid1967Man  over a year ago

Portlaoise


"Yeah, be good to get feed back.

Yours is very clear with plenty of info and I think gives the impression of you that you want it to.

Maybe some paragraphs and punctuation? Good grammar is hot

"

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By *uriousVoyeurMan  over a year ago

Northside


"A few tips would be no harm!!! (Said a fair few wimmin on fab )

Fairly decent profile imo. You let people know what you’re looking for, what you bring to the table and it seems honest. A more recent veri would probably be helpful but hope you find what you’re looking for!"

Thank you for that...much appreciated! I've had a look at yours (profile and pics)....(especially the pics)! Tbh,there's very little if anything I'd change about it! Very well written... pics and videos are excellent!! If you're ever up this neck of the woods and fancy a coffee you know where my inbox is!

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By *electableicecream OP   Man  over a year ago

The West


"Always open to suggestions to improve ours.

In general if a bio looks like a long winded essay I pass . A few likes and dislike by all means good to know what they like ."

The bio is really clear about how you guys go about meets feels pretty easy going.

From my point of view I'd love to read a little bit more about what you guys are into meet wise like what attracts you and what you might enjoy taste wise

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Would like some suggestions or feedback

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By *heBlowinsCouple  over a year ago

West Cork


"Would like some suggestions or feedback "

Just about as good a bio for a single guy as we ever see. Wouldn't change anything. Just a typo: "fantasy's"

Full disclaimer: you're on our hotlist so we may be biased

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By (user no longer on site) 46 weeks ago

Late to the party but always open to suggestions and ideas too

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