The profile text, photos, and veri all good. But break the text into paragraphs a bit. Just makes in easier to read and hold people's attention better.
You look hot by the way. Pity you aren't closer  Mrs Sin xx |
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Yeah, just change the formatting. It's rough on the eyes to read.
But, nowt wrong with it. The right people will be interested in it, and that's all that matters. |
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"The profile text, photos, and veri all good. But break the text into paragraphs a bit. Just makes in easier to read and hold people's attention better.
You look hot by the way. Pity you aren't closer Mrs Sin xx"
Thank you  , good advice there |
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"Yeah I like the photos and the bio. I'd remove the reference in the last paragraph to 'shite talk' though. The line with the S's isn't shite talk, it's funny. Good luck. Mrs  "
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