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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"A morning horn
It might have been useful
But now it is gone"
Yours is better.
The haiku, not the horn.  
(although - I'm only hitting 4 in the first line, and 6 in the 2nd?!)  |
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"Asking for too much
Deplorable men of fab
Always annoying
 
Love it!
Still 6 on the 2nd though? 
How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5."
Deplorable is only 3 syllables though. |
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"Asking for too much
Deplorable men of fab
Always annoying
Love it!
Still 6 on the 2nd though?
How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.
Deplorable is only 3 syllables though. "
It's definitely 4 syllables. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Asking for too much
Deplorable men of fab
Always annoying
Love it!
Still 6 on the 2nd though?
How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.
Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.
It's definitely 4 syllables."
I stand corrected and humbly apologise - it is indeed four syllables.... Well done!  |
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"Asking for too much
Deplorable men of fab
Always annoying
Love it!
Still 6 on the 2nd though?
How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.
Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.
It's definitely 4 syllables."
I'll take it back. Depends on how you say it. Up here it's probably only 2 |
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"Asking for too much
Deplorable men of fab
Always annoying
Love it!
Still 6 on the 2nd though?
How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.
Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.
It's definitely 4 syllables.
I stand corrected and humbly apologise - it is indeed four syllables.... Well done! "
Why thank you good sir
I feel vindicated now
My perfect haiku
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Asking for too much
Deplorable men of fab
Always annoying
Love it!
Still 6 on the 2nd though?
How? 4 syllable word followed by 3 1 syllable words. It's 5,7,5.
Deplorable is only 3 syllables though.
It's definitely 4 syllables.
I stand corrected and humbly apologise - it is indeed four syllables.... Well done!
Why thank you good sir
I feel vindicated now
My perfect haiku
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