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Hi guys
We need to revamp our profile. Looking for some advice and pointers please. We have had some success but would like to improve the chances. Any help would be greatly appreciated. |
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It's a good profile, a good selection of pictures of both of you. I knew your musical tastes with one t-shirt you were wearing 
The profile text, yes it's long, but you've adequately described what you're looking for on here. I'm someone who appreciates a good description of the person I'm possibly going to meet and you've certainly achieved that in your profile. You could tidy it up slightly as the paragraphs start in the main with 'we' or 'if' but that truly is nitpicking 
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"It's a good profile, a good selection of pictures of both of you. I knew your musical tastes with one t-shirt you were wearing
The profile text, yes it's long, but you've adequately described what you're looking for on here. I'm someone who appreciates a good description of the person I'm possibly going to meet and you've certainly achieved that in your profile. You could tidy it up slightly as the paragraphs start in the main with 'we' or 'if' but that truly is nitpicking
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Thank you, will check that. All criticism welcome. |
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"Hi guys
We need to revamp our profile. Looking for some advice and pointers please. We have had some success but would like to improve the chances. Any help would be greatly appreciated."
The only problem i see is the 200+ miles away bit  other than that it's all good  |
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