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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Hi, I've given my profile description an overhaul, can you give me some feedback, thanks.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Maybe edit out the so many negatives you have used about yourself. Put a more positive spin on things.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

For example. Just say you enjoy watching porn. Play the drums. No need to indulge that you are not in a band. Could then be used as a talking point. Getting back into fitness rather than I used to be fit.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thanks, just trying to keep it truthful rather than come accros over confident like some guys.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

No need to be overconfident just not so negative. You can still be truthful aswell.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Okay, thanks, I'll tweek it a bit.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Too much info on the porn as someone else has said and also I admire your honesty about having a partner and her not knowing you’re here but that puts a lot of people off

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By *tephTV67TV/TS  over a year ago

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One picture is not enough, a guy needs at minimum 6 pictures, body and some smartly dressed as well.

Any woman looking for a confident man will immediately leave your profile. But she may have second thoughts if she knew you are a drummer. If you put negatives at the beginning of a profile all you're doing is encouraging people to look elsewhere.

Think of it as selling a car, so far you've shown the front of it and made a list of everything wrong. A good salesman encourages you to buy with great pictures and positives about the motor, he will have to later on mention what's wrong with it as well.

A profile shouldn't be a bunch of lies it should be honest, but it should also sell yourself to whomever is reading it. Start with all your positive traits and end with issues that you want to be honest about.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

To be brutally honest it's all about you and nothing about what you can offer someone

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thanks guys, just thought I'd get negatives out the way first to save people time rather than read them at the end. I'll add a bit more to it rather than just about me.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Hi, I've given my profile description an overhaul, can you give me some feedback, thanks. "

Its ok but you still need more photos.

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