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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Profile is "meh!". Average for 95% of Fab male profiles.
Text is long but doesn't grab. Pictures are there.
Advice; review other profiles. Especially ones with a good verification listing.
They are getting attention. You nedd to ask the qusstion "why"... |
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The background in your pictures really stand out, crop them and take out the background noise, my eyes are drawn to the suitcase, stain on the carpet etc..
Two pictures will never be enough to entice, remember nobody will read your profile if they're not attracted to the guy in the first place.
My main gripe with guys profiles is lack of personality, I think you do express some of it. However it's just too long and wordy. You could easily reduce it by a quarter or even more and still get your points across.
On the plus side you've obviously put some work into it so that shows you're genuine and not a fly by night.
Good luck Op  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hey people just wanna say hi and see what people are saying, and if the wanna go e me some feed back on my profile, thank S"
pictures are so unimaginative, have a look at some of the ones on here
you want to mesmorise people with them
and yes the background things are more where my eyes go! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Bloody hell. Some people don't hold back do they. Christ. Poor guy.  "
Blunt honesty is the best policy.
To be fair your own profile is pretty much in the same bracket.
95% of male profiles are identical.
Couple of below average pictures that you wouldn't let you inlaws see on a holiday snap review!!
At best 1 or 2 lines of text that means nothing. Or they go the other way and add text that just goes on and on with no positive direction.
Fab give guidance in the help pages on profiles. There are plenty of profiles to look. Good and bad.
If you ask in an open forum you will get rough with the smooth! Ying yang..
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