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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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So many people ask for profile advice so let's collect them all in one place!
If you want an honest review of yours let us know! If you fancy giving a bit of advice then jump right in! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Why not? Always willing to improve
Good text. More pics less phone hiding most of your body  "
Thank you! Thinking of some more pics and will try to sort this weekend |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Im looking to change mine so feel free...
I like it. Straight to the point and a good range of pics. "
Thanks...but judging by some of the messages i get, i think it needs to be a bit more to the point  |
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"Im looking to change mine so feel free...
I like it. Straight to the point and a good range of pics.
Thanks...but judging by some of the messages i get, i think it needs to be a bit more to the point "
I'm guessing most of the messages are from people who've seen the photos but not read the text... I get the opposite lol |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Why not, if any feels to critique mine. "
Great pics. Your text made me laugh though, you can't find one woman so you're gonna look for more than one!?! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Always open to some constructive criticism."
What do you know how it works? I never understand that line. 
You could do with more pics, 2 pics of basically your stomach don't give much away. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Im looking to change mine so feel free...
I like it. Straight to the point and a good range of pics.
Thanks...but judging by some of the messages i get, i think it needs to be a bit more to the point "
I tend to find those messages come from people who don't read profiles  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I’m thinking of adding an arse photo to my portfolio and maybe spruce up my details "
Some pics from a distance would be good so we can see your full shape.
Your text is a bit negative but better than a lot of others. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Go on then...... let me have it..... (ducks for cover)"
Your text is a bit rambly and I'd probably put the being attached bit nearer the start, most people feel that's important info.
Some pics would be good, we can't see much in the one you have. |
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"Go on then...... let me have it..... (ducks for cover)
Your text is a bit rambly and I'd probably put the being attached bit nearer the start, most people feel that's important info.
Some pics would be good, we can't see much in the one you have. "
Phew..... could have been a lot worse!!!!!!
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"Go for it 
A wee bit negative, you don't say what you DO want.
Nice teasing pics though "
Fair enough on not saying in detail what I do want from a meet.
Personally I don’t say what I specifically want, as I’m very much an open book, go with the flow type of person and see where the mood takes me with a like minded person and every meet is different |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Go on let me know your thoughts on my profile "
More smile, less cock would be good.
Your text is a bit vague and doesn't say much about what you can offer. Saying "just ask" won't work, most people will just move on to someone who offers the info, it saves time. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Go for it
A wee bit negative, you don't say what you DO want.
Nice teasing pics though
Fair enough on not saying in detail what I do want from a meet.
Personally I don’t say what I specifically want, as I’m very much an open book, go with the flow type of person and see where the mood takes me with a like minded person and every meet is different "
I'm the same |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Go on. Give us your ruling on our profile"
Some more pics would be good, the one of you both seems pointless since most of it is blurred.
Your text is a bit negative and reads like a set of rules. It seems much more focused on what you want than what you can offer, if you want something long term then it should be mutually beneficial and the guy should be an equal not just someone who jumped through hoops for you. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"So many people ask for profile advice so let's collect them all in one place!
If you want an honest review of yours let us know! If you fancy giving a bit of advice then jump right in! "
Go for it |
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"Go for it
A wee bit negative, you don't say what you DO want.
Nice teasing pics though
Fair enough on not saying in detail what I do want from a meet.
Personally I don’t say what I specifically want, as I’m very much an open book, go with the flow type of person and see where the mood takes me with a like minded person and every meet is different
I'm the same "
Never limit your options within your boundaries |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"So many people ask for profile advice so let's collect them all in one place!
If you want an honest review of yours let us know! If you fancy giving a bit of advice then jump right in!
Go for it "
Your text is less about you and more about quoting clichés. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Why not a good critique can't do any harm "
Your pics are quite niche which is fine if you only want to play that way but it may put others off.
As will the 420 thing. |
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"So many people ask for profile advice so let's collect them all in one place!
If you want an honest review of yours let us know! If you fancy giving a bit of advice then jump right in! "
Love your profile, v sexy,no suggestions maybe more of the same. Xx |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Would love advise respectful messaging to people no crude comments never get anywhere "
Your drowning in the bath pics don't really show you off to your best.
Your text is very negative and seems like you're putting others down. Telling timewasters not to waste your time is just wasting time, if they're gonna do it they will anyway.
The bit about no replies is just whiney. It's standard on fab not to reply. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Am curious..I think its my photo's and not being able to accomodate thats the issue on mine..what do you all think?"
Your text is good but your pics are lacking. You only really have 2 as the other 2 are near enough the same. Neither are the most flattering. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Look at mine be brutal and tell me what you think"
Some pics would be good. Your text is OK but it doesn't really flow. The bit about being clean I always feel doesn't need said-it should be standard for grown ups. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Go for it... be as honest and as ruthless as you like!!!!
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Your pics are like a jigsaw with pieces missing. A full body shot is always good.
Your text is OK but a bit repetitive. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"We would love to hear some viewsx suggestions for improvement? Xx"
Good clear text although the legal bit at the bottom is totally pointless. I'd like to see more of him in pics plus id maybe thin them out a bit, there's a lot to scroll through and many are a bit samey
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Nervous of the responses now  "
most people agree if you must have a cock pic one is enough.
Your text seems rushed and doesn't really say anything about what you want or can offer other than the standard "I want to have fun" |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Id like an honest review of mine "
great pics but your text is a bit confusing. You're definitely not looking for single men but will consider single men?
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"Id like an honest review of mine great pics but your text is a bit confusing. You're definitely not looking for single men but will consider single men? "
Im indecisive... i dont want loads of single guys texting me. Id rather message someone i like. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'd like a review of mine!
I keep adding to it but usually when someone has pissed me off so it probably sounds bitchy..."
You have good photo's but the bathroom one gives a hint of a lovely smile and one of you smiling would show your warmer side? I also interpret that you only want messages from people who are into poly relationships or BDSM. If this is accurate then great but if not then I would add in more about what you want and less of what of don't want. Just my thoughts! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Your profile looks great to me... plenty of pics (which are very hot!), you’ve explained what you like and what you want without it being so long that people will lose attention. No need to change a lot at all! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I’d love some constructive feedback if anyone is happy to? I tend to not get many replies despite original messages, which are respectful and include a face pic. I know verifications will help but if any feedback on my profile will help I’d welcome in  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Yes please! We've had very little success x
Wouldent belive that! Cute looking couple"
Probs mostly because your only looking for woman. If you had filters for men open, youd be swimming in unwanted mail haha |
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A review would be handy,I edit it so much but perhaps too personal and honest? and never sure whether to leave the dirtier pics public,sometimes they're hidden, sometimes I leave them open. I guess curious if any interest and feels kinda hot!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Go on then tell me the worst "
Pretty good IMO. You come across as pretty genuine. It's a fair reflection of who you are and what your looking for. Personally I would drop all the legal spiel at the end, I know a lot if folk have it but it serves no purpose. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Go on then tell me the worst "
You may want to review your pics. People don’t want to see who you shagged but who you are. Be creative, a nice quality pic works wonder. If you go for flesh don’t do close up of your privates, otherwise a suit seems to get attention. |
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Aaah,this is what a guy messaged me today...
"I know you're straight! Lol.
I just wanted to say... Good luck. You've written probably one of the best profiles and with human wording I've seen.
I hope a horny woman snaps you up!!"
Thanks person,and no,they won't even speak to me,though that was such a nice message a fabbed your cumshot pic |
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Good start though! 
