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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Hey had a quick revamp let us know what you think

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By *attooedBBWWoman over a year ago

Basingstoke

Profile write up has some grammar/spelling issues and comes across a bit self deprecating

Photos aren’t bad though as at least it’s not all cock pics! The teasing boxers one is

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By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

Do you think women are turned on to be described as your "bit of stress relief" ?

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By *emini ManMan over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

"Do you think women are turned on to be described as your "bit of stress relief" ? "

This, plus the attempt to put down other guys isn't particularly great.

You need to try and get across a bit more detail about you and not only what you're looking for, but what you think you can offer.

Try to think of your profile as a shop window and ask yourself if you'd go into your shop to find out more if you looked at it.

The pics with your mates faces blanked out are a bit dubious too - in this day and age it's easy enough to take a selfie so maybe rethink your pics a bit. Also it'd be potentially quite easy to track down your location from the poster on the wall in one of your pics - do you really want people knowing where you drink?

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Do you think women are turned on to be described as your "bit of stress relief" ?

This, plus the attempt to put down other guys isn't particularly great.

You need to try and get across a bit more detail about you and not only what you're looking for, but what you think you can offer.

Try to think of your profile as a shop window and ask yourself if you'd go into your shop to find out more if you looked at it.

Thanks for the advice its my buisness so if someone comes in they will see me anyway

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By *amissCouple over a year ago

chelmsford

The pictures with your mates in look a bit odd, easy enough to take some of just yourself

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Yeah...slagging off other men is a turn off. Also, the veri from a male, but listed as straight with your veris hidden....If you read through a lot of profile advice threads, you’ll see a lot of people would question this.

Enjoy your fabbing! A&I x

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By *ngelina4uWoman over a year ago

Camberley/Middleton

"Hey had a quick revamp let us know what you think

5 lines and it only points out you like to put others down not exactly a good start.

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By *revaunanceCouple over a year ago

Exeter

Your profile text is a bit bland and generalist. We all want "abit of fun on the odd occasion" and we all have "alot to offer". But what do you have that the rest of the guys in your area don't that will help you stand out from the crowd?

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