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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Can anyone help me out by checking out my profile and giving me some advice good or bad i dont mind and im not gunna kick off over negative stuff i just want some pointers on it please |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I'd get rid of the photos where your arms are up, but arse facing the camera.
Your text is good, I'd leave out the big girls and ebony girls bit though. If that's what you like, then you can search for them yourself.
All in all, not a bad effort in my opinion, better than most. |
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Personally I'd lose the first line. There is no point referring to an account that does not exist.
You might also want to reword the last two lines as well:
"Im on both kik and watsapp so if u want them again just ask
I have kik too look for stretchmkenzie87" |
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I think the first thing you need to do, is check the spelling, grammar, and punctuation. It's quite difficult to read in places, and looks rushed. This might give some people the impression that you are lazy, or not really bothered.
The second thing would be to take some new photos. It's good that you're willing to put your face out there, that will help you, but the ones you have up aren't as flattering as they could be. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"I think the first thing you need to do, is check the spelling, grammar, and punctuation. It's quite difficult to read in places, and looks rushed. This might give some people the impression that you are lazy, or not really bothered.
The second thing would be to take some new photos. It's good that you're willing to put your face out there, that will help you, but the ones you have up aren't as flattering as they could be."
thanks for the advice mate i was afraid id get heckled at lol i shall try my best to correct it |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Re wrote it now hopefully that reads alot better thank you all for the advice could you please check it out and let me know how it looks ill be taking some decent pics in the morning too |
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"Re wrote it now hopefully that reads alot better thank you all for the advice could you please check it out and let me know how it looks ill be taking some decent pics in the morning too "
Much better. Although, I would be careful about using phrases like 'date' and 'connecting on an emotional level', it sounds more like you're seeking a proper relationship rather that a fwb. Perhaps change 'date' to 'meet', and 'personal level', rather than 'emotional level'.
Other than that, good job. |
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Your profile reads like you do want a relationship op, a very relaxed one but I think you could be blurring the lines here. Have a think and be honest with yourself then look at the profile and if you think it's you to a T then cool keep it, if not then change it. Good luck  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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As said before, ur pics and text don't seem to marry up. Ur pics paint a picture of submission which doesn't seem to be mentioned in ur profile text. Mate, if that's ur thing, then be honest about it. It's all good.
I don't see anything wrong with ur profile, it seems honest and well meant. Get some new pics would be my advice. Good luck |
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