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over a year ago
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I don’t really agree with tweaking people’s profiles so they aren’t their own work anymore.
People would be meeting based off things that aren’t a true representation of yourself.
Basic tips for a profile though are have decent pictures, no legal notices on the profile, make sure what you’ve written is spelt correctly and no grammatical errors, and for men, I’d be hesitant to say that you can do something, in your case make a woman shake and be wet, sounds ridiculous. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I don’t really agree with tweaking people’s profiles so they aren’t their own work anymore.
People would be meeting based off things that aren’t a true representation of yourself.
Basic tips for a profile though are have decent pictures, no legal notices on the profile, make sure what you’ve written is spelt correctly and no grammatical errors, and for men, I’d be hesitant to say that you can do something, in your case make a woman shake and be wet, sounds ridiculous. "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Okay what do you guys suggest me to use instead ??? Any help is welcome
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Your own words. Your profile is a reflection of you.
Think of it likevan introduction, how do you want to come across? Inject a bit of personality!
And pics, you won't get far if no one can see you. |
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"Okay what do you guys suggest me to use instead ??? Any help is welcome
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It really has to come from yourself,just don't write claiming you can do something amazing with a woman,normal talk showing your personality is far more attractive to me personally. |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
To be honest OP it reads a little juvenile to me - almost like you've watched too many porn films and have just put what you think people will want rather than having actually thought about it.
Whilst sex can result in getting "hot and sweaty" it's not an alluring image to conjure up either - the "show you a few things" line will to some suggest that you're looking to be taught and most won't want to do that.
Agree with ignite that more pics would help too.
If I were you I'd make like Orange Juice and rip it up and start again
Think about what you're looking for, the type of person you are, and what you think you can offer a potential meet and try and put that in words that are both unique and alluring and make you stand out - inject some of your personality into it.
Take a look around at other well verified guys profiles for ideas of what might work for you both from a profile text perspective and pictures - don't copy but get inspiration for your own thing.
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I don’t really agree with tweaking people’s profiles so they aren’t their own work anymore.
People would be meeting based off things that aren’t a true representation of yourself.
Basic tips for a profile though are have decent pictures, no legal notices on the profile, make sure what you’ve written is spelt correctly and no grammatical errors, and for men, I’d be hesitant to say that you can do something, in your case make a woman shake and be wet, sounds ridiculous. "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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If that’s your personality then that’s your personality. That’s what I mean about giving people advice.
I personally think it’s worse than the original, there’s no punctuation either.
When you write something read it out loud and where you’d naturally pause for a breath, put a comma, or a full stop.
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By (user no longer on site)
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It’s still bad though. Like I said, it’s worse than the original.
We can’t tell you what to write because then it’s conning someone into meeting you.
If you think what you have written is a true reflection on what you want and what you can offer then you have to stick with it.
The punctuation is terrible though and for some people that can be a deal breaker. |
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"It’s still bad though. Like I said, it’s worse than the original.
We can’t tell you what to write because then it’s conning someone into meeting you.
If you think what you have written is a true reflection on what you want and what you can offer then you have to stick with it.
The punctuation is terrible though and for some people that can be a deal breaker. "
That's the thing if it's him we can't tell him it's bad can we. The next woman may think it's a good profile. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi I'm looking for a woman that likes to play but also likes to lay back and let me take control.
I like my meets like my football, intense, fun and always play to win.
I'm looking to meet like minded people who enjoy a good laugh, someone who likes a cheeky drink and doesn't hide thier dark side.
I like to play naughty games whilst out on meets to keep things interesting. I want to put a smile on my dates face throughout the time we're out.
If that sounds like someone you’d enjoy being out with then send me a message, let's start talking.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Nice to see a few ladies trying to help a fella out.. i guess its not about changing it to what others would put its just helping to.word things right? I know what i want to say but im not great at writing my thoughts down.. |
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