Your username is really off putting. If I were getting a lot of mail (fairly normal), I might not even get to your message: I'd delete just for the name.
Your profile text is fairly generic and needs work. You need to sell yourself. What kind of person are you, what/ who are you looking for, what do you have to offer? Check your spelling/ grammar and lose the text speak.
Your photo is OK, but not flattering and doesn't give a good sense of your body. |
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Username is off putting.
"New on here so plz don't be gentle."
Avoid txt spk, it looks lazy.
"Looking for nsa fwb or fb.dont want to waste"
Check for, and correct any spelling, punctuation, and type errors. Again, it looks lazy.
A few extra photos won't hurt either. |
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"Your username is really off putting. If I were getting a lot of mail (fairly normal), I might not even get to your message: I'd delete just for the name.
Your profile text is fairly generic and needs work. You need to sell yourself. What kind of person are you, what/ who are you looking for, what do you have to offer? Check your spelling/ grammar and lose the text speak.
Your photo is OK, but not flattering and doesn't give a good sense of your body. "
I agree with the above,for its worth. The text speak does tend to annoy folk. Maybe, I would add a few more photos. |
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Most of the text os about being new or about not wasting time - this doesn't sell you.
You're very new, it takes ages for you new single men to improve your approach and gain results - keep at it.
What's needed is more information about you in a style that sells you. Look at a lot of men's profiles and get a feel for approaches that shine and stand out - don't copy them but contrast the great with the mundane and tweak yours so it has more of the feel of the greater types.
People want to know if they may like and fancy you - photos that give them a feel for your body, build etc is ideal. Don't put a lot of cock pics - they're generally disliked. A smiling, natural, relaxed pic of your face will work really well. Smiles invite, gruff less so.
People view your profile when they get your messages, so effort invested is helpful. Keep it as an ongoing project. |
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