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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's very generic, there's nothing that I won't have read on a thousand other guys profiles. What makes you stand out from the rest. Why should I meet you instead of the next guy? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey thanks to both of you. Just been thinking of so much more I can say so I will rewrite it. Just can't put it in the right words yet.
Many thanks. Charlie xx |
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Bland and full of blah blah blah.
It boils down to: I'm a good bloke who travels a lot. I want you to entertain me and give me sex.
There really isn't much in your profile text to encourage people to contact you, especially as they have no idea where you are.
Your location today is Wadebridge, is that home, or a work location. If it's home then why not say so in your text and then change your location as you move around the country, we do.
As you work in different areas and spend weeks and months there, is it a fair assumption that there is some sort of plan to your work? Why not add future locations. For example: I'll be in Portsmouth From early Feb until Apr 6th and then I'll be working in York until August.
Your photo's are pretty good, but two mirror images of your chest seems a little unnecessary.
Consider adding to your text. Can you add a little about your job? Not specific, but maybe a bit about the general field you work in, construction work, software engineer or lion tamer.
You could maybe expand a little about what you are looking for, but definitely should write something about what you offer to a prospective meet.
In fairness you have 1 meet so far, so you're doing better than some.
Good luck |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Bland and full of blah blah blah.
It boils down to: I'm a good bloke who travels a lot. I want you to entertain me and give me sex.
There really isn't much in your profile text to encourage people to contact you, especially as they have no idea where you are.
Your location today is Wadebridge, is that home, or a work location. If it's home then why not say so in your text and then change your location as you move around the country, we do.
As you work in different areas and spend weeks and months there, is it a fair assumption that there is some sort of plan to your work? Why not add future locations. For example: I'll be in Portsmouth From early Feb until Apr 6th and then I'll be working in York until August.
Your photo's are pretty good, but two mirror images of your chest seems a little unnecessary.
Consider adding to your text. Can you add a little about your job? Not specific, but maybe a bit about the general field you work in, construction work, software engineer or lion tamer.
You could maybe expand a little about what you are looking for, but definitely should write something about what you offer to a prospective meet.
In fairness you have 1 meet so far, so you're doing better than some.
Good luck "
Thanks for your advise. It's undated now! What's your thoughts? |
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By *tirluvMan
over a year ago
the right frame of mind -London |
Tbh it's as boring as fuck -no humour, no personality and i'm sure that telling everyone how horny you are will most likely have the opposite effect without at least some rapport being built up first |
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