"I am 38 years old. 6ft tall."
The age and height is already on your profile, so doesn't need to go here. Also, your height is stated as 5'11" elsewhere in the profile.
"I'm the second time on the site."
*It's my second time on the site.
"The first time my expectations were too selfish I thought only about myself but such behavior did not bring any results. Nobody wanted to talk with me. This time I want to give something from myself to be a part of someone's dreams."
Honesty is good, but this might be a little too honest. It comes across like the only reason you want to give is to receive. Which may be true, but doesn't sound appealing.
"I would like to try new experiences."
Might help to mention some of the kind of experiences you would like to try.
"I would like to get to know a woman or couple that I could talk to and get a drink and get to know each other."
*I would like to meet women, or couples that I can talk to, get a drink with, and get to know.
"I'm Polish, but my English is good. ??"
Emojis don't work on the profile text and just show as '??'.
"If we could, we could fantasize"
This sentence doesn't make much sense.
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over a year ago
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""I am 38 years old. 6ft tall."
The age and height is already on your profile, so doesn't need to go here. Also, your height is stated as 5'11" elsewhere in the profile.
"I'm the second time on the site."
*It's my second time on the site.
"The first time my expectations were too selfish I thought only about myself but such behavior did not bring any results. Nobody wanted to talk with me. This time I want to give something from myself to be a part of someone's dreams."
Honesty is good, but this might be a little too honest. It comes across like the only reason you want to give is to receive. Which may be true, but doesn't sound appealing.
"I would like to try new experiences."
Might help to mention some of the kind of experiences you would like to try.
"I would like to get to know a woman or couple that I could talk to and get a drink and get to know each other."
*I would like to meet women, or couples that I can talk to, get a drink with, and get to know.
"I'm Polish, but my English is good. ??"
Emojis don't work on the profile text and just show as '??'.
"If we could, we could fantasize"
This sentence doesn't make much sense.
Hope this helps, I'm sure others will be along shortly to give some advice too."
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I think it sounds ok but personally I think you have to much information on there it doesn’t really give some one much to chat about because it’s all on your profile but that’s just my
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