FabSwingers.com > Forums > Introductions > Yet another “critique my profile” thread

Yet another “critique my profile” thread

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

Been on here for a few months, but really not sure if the tone of my profile is right. Any advice would be gladly accepted.

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Well done for pointing out the obvious about cock pics in your profile text. Must be the first I read in a guy's profile

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Oh and I would delete the picture of you in the bathroom. Nobody wants to see a bog

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

"Oh and I would delete the picture of you in the bathroom. Nobody wants to see a bog

Thanks, great advice. I can’t believe I didn’t think of that!

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Oh and I would delete the picture of you in the bathroom. Nobody wants to see a bog

Thanks, great advice. I can’t believe I didn’t think of that!

It's ok, shit happens, literally there

Nice to see someone listening to others..

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

"Oh and I would delete the picture of you in the bathroom. Nobody wants to see a bog

Thanks, great advice. I can’t believe I didn’t think of that!

It's ok, shit happens, literally there

Nice to see someone listening to others..

Thanks again. I genuinely appreciate the critique.

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

You're welcome. I would add a few more points but I'll let others to have their say, too

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

"You're welcome. I would add a few more points but I'll let others to have their say, too

No, please do add more points. The more advice the better!

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Ok.. you've asked

Get rid of that "don't be shy and I don bite" crap. Also that last paragraph is totally useless.

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *aturedisgracefully!!Couple over a year ago

Leicester

"Been on here for a few months, but really not sure if the tone of my profile is right. Any advice would be gladly accepted.

JP"

You did ask.

The comment about 'not biting' has been done to death and being honest is absolutely cringeworthy.

And about your legal declaration; how would you enforce it?

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Also you should explain why can't you accommodate.

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

"Ok.. you've asked

Get rid of that "don't be shy and I don bite" crap. Also that last paragraph is totally useless."

Thanks, and don’t worry about being blunt or brutal. I did ask for it after all.

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Ok.. you've asked

Get rid of that "don't be shy and I don bite" crap. Also that last paragraph is totally useless.

Thanks, and don’t worry about being blunt or brutal. I did ask for it after all.

You've found the best one to get advice from then

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

"You did ask.

The comment about 'not biting' has been done to death and being honest is absolutely cringeworthy.

And about your legal declaration; how would you enforce it?

Thank you. Sometimes it takes someone else to point out the obvious. Thanks.

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Are you single, attached, married?

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Your profile picture is a little strange it has a shadow around your head that makes it look like you have fluff on your head.

Good luck

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Your very first picture - face is hidden - no need as you are showing it in the others

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

I think your pics are great and you have a well written profile. Nice to see you have taken some of the earlier advice on board.

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"I think your pics are great and you have a well written profile. Nice to see you have taken some of the earlier advice on board. "

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

"I think your pics are great and you have a well written profile. Nice to see you have taken some of the earlier advice on board. "

Thank you

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

By *e_jp OP Man over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

"Your profile picture is a little strange it has a shadow around your head that makes it look like you have fluff on your head.

Good luck "

Again, thank you. Nobody likes a fluffy head, do they!

Reply privately, Reply in forum +quote or View forums list

» Add a new message to this topic