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Profile Critique Wanted

By *appyWanderer OP Man over a year ago

Croydon

Hey Forum,

I am further pruning my profile and would like some advice.

I updated the structure, with what the popular guys on fab have, but something seems off, and i can't put my finger on it.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Looks okay to me OP, except it should be "to" instead of "for" in the header if I'm being really fussy

. You have a nice bum

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Looks fine to me

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By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

Nice profile and pics

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By *appyWanderer OP Man over a year ago

Croydon

"Looks okay to me OP, except it should be "to" instead of "for" in the header if I'm being really fussy

. You have a nice bum

Thanks for the review and compliment. I have updated the typo.

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By *rkeb3Man over a year ago

east Lancashire road

A good cock shot would been better

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By *otel PlaymatesCouple over a year ago

Cheshire

Looks fine to me, i would engage with a profile like that and im a little fussy, well done.x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

You might mean discrete but probably mean discreet.

The welcome start and message me finish seems to be trending recently. Personally, we find it a bit cringe/patronising and are already looking to get out of there when someone welcomes us to their profile. We're obviously old and wise enough to message someone of interest without being invited to.

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