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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Hey, I need help or advice about my profile description part.

I am rubbish at writing stuff about myself. So any advice or comments would be greatful.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok

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By *SAchickWoman  over a year ago

Hillside desolate

[Removed by poster at 24/11/18 08:44:13]

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

oh and some public pics might help too, not too many of your little soldier though.

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By *SAchickWoman  over a year ago

Hillside desolate

The bit where you make not so complimentary comments about people you've met before... I'd lose that.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

It wouldn’t be about you if we wrote it for you as we don’t know you. It would become just some generic, non personal, thing.

As it stands, it’s better than many.

The paragraph where you talk about not wanting to just fuck and go isn’t necessary, in my view. Or it needs wording better.

A couple of public pics would help too.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I couldn't be arsed reading it all mate,sorry,have you included broccoli?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok"

Which ones are them? If don't mind me asking?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"I couldn't be arsed reading it all mate,sorry,have you included broccoli?"

Broccoli aha??

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok

Which ones are them? If don't mind me asking? "

describing going down on a women with bad personal hygiene

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"The bit where you make not so complimentary comments about people you've met before... I'd lose that.

"

OK thank you x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"I couldn't be arsed reading it all mate,sorry,have you included broccoli?

Broccoli aha?? "

Chicks love it mate!! Go crazy for it,go ahead and ask them

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

You've asked for help a few times OP.

What have you changed so far?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok

Which ones are them? If don't mind me asking?

describing going down on a women with bad personal hygiene "

Just updated my profile on your comment.

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By *allySlinkyWoman  over a year ago

Leeds

Saying you are not here to fuck the whole site is offputting plus the bit where you describe a fuck and go.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Saying you are not here to fuck the whole site is offputting plus the bit where you describe a fuck and go. "

Sorted that section out thank you x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok

Which ones are them? If don't mind me asking?

describing going down on a women with bad personal hygiene

Just updated my profile on your comment. "

Personally, I dont understand why guys use being clean and smelling nice as a selling point.

Surely that would be a given?

But what do I know

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"I couldn't be arsed reading it all mate,sorry,have you included broccoli?

Broccoli aha??

Chicks love it mate!! Go crazy for it,go ahead and ask them"

Mmmmm. Men with broccoli.

One of fabs best kept secrets til now.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"You've asked for help a few times OP.

What have you changed so far?"

Am just trying to get a feel of people opinions on it really, more than anything. I have a look at it and try changing it around but I still get stuck.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok

Which ones are them? If don't mind me asking?

describing going down on a women with bad personal hygiene

Just updated my profile on your comment.

Personally, I dont understand why guys use being clean and smelling nice as a selling point.

Surely that would be a given?

But what do I know"

Probably because people ask for that when doing their own profile.

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By *allySlinkyWoman  over a year ago

Leeds


"Saying you are not here to fuck the whole site is offputting plus the bit where you describe a fuck and go.

Sorted that section out thank you x"

You still say you are not looking to fuck everything that moves !

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok

Which ones are them? If don't mind me asking?

describing going down on a women with bad personal hygiene

Just updated my profile on your comment.

Personally, I dont understand why guys use being clean and smelling nice as a selling point.

Surely that would be a given?

But what do I know"

I like to put it in so people will know I won't turn up to a meet unwashed and smelly. I've spoken to people in the past where they've met guys like it, so I thought I would just put it in like.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Saying you are not here to fuck the whole site is offputting plus the bit where you describe a fuck and go.

Sorted that section out thank you x

You still say you are not looking to fuck everything that moves !"

Sorted ahah xxxx

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By *allySlinkyWoman  over a year ago

Leeds


"

Sorted ahah xxxx"

Good Alan Partridge impression !

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"

Sorted ahah xxxx

Good Alan Partridge impression !"

never liked him. Aha

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville

OP...

Your pics are average, at best.

The strap-line about genuine people is negative and off-putting.

Your comment about liking older people is patronising and insulting.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"OP...

Your pics are average, at best.

The strap-line about genuine people is negative and off-putting.

Your comment about liking older people is patronising and insulting.

"

Sorted the strap-line out and the comment on my description thank you x sadly the pics are the best I have at the moment but will be finding more soon.

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By *uciyassMan  over a year ago

Leeds


"apart from all the negative comments, it’s ok

Which ones are them? If don't mind me asking?

describing going down on a women with bad personal hygiene

Just updated my profile on your comment.

Personally, I dont understand why guys use being clean and smelling nice as a selling point.

Surely that would be a given?

But what do I know"

I like to hear experienced then I know they can do the business the who business and nothing but the business. Doesn’t it??

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