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By *lceeWoman
over a year ago
Leeds |
Great pictures, really give me a sense of who you are in different ways.
Your copy is good but needs work on the editing front - just a few typos/grammatical issues.
Maybe put a bit more of yourself in there - give a sense of who you are in the same way your photos do - but that’s only a minor quibble and it gets it across well already. Already streets ahead of many I see on there and the fact that you’re meeting proves that.
Maybe think of your target market. What kind of woman are you looking to attract and what do you have to offer them? Then you can adjust your messaging to suit. Again, that’s just the comms person in me getting to work.
All in all though, I’d message back on the strength of your profile.  |
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