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Women, please advice on my profile

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Hardly people respond to my messages. What could be wrong?

Any advice please?

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By *appyWandererMan over a year ago

Croydon

Initial impressions from a straight guy:

- Several typos and grammar mistakes.

- Poorly structured sentences.

- Too many pictures focused on chest,

Example rewrite of your first paragraph:

Thanks for looking to my profile.

I am a well built, educated, and well-mannered professional, looking to please women, and straight couples, who enjoy laughter and social drinking.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Why so many exclamation marks?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Too many chest pics, it’s not a bad profile.... but.... maybe a little humour, it just seems a little clinical and serious.

For myself I’m not a fan of cock shots.

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By *ilkenWoman over a year ago

Manchester

I would get rid of the legal warning it is totally pointless and detracts from the rest of your profile

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Too many chest pics, it’s not a bad profile.... but.... maybe a little humour, it just seems a little clinical and serious.

For myself I’m not a fan of cock shots.

Thanks, Updated the photos.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"I would get rid of the legal warning it is totally pointless and detracts from the rest of your profile "

Yep, removed it. Thanks

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Why so many exclamation marks?"

Thanks, got rid of them.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Initial impressions from a straight guy:

- Several typos and grammar mistakes.

- Poorly structured sentences.

- Too many pictures focused on chest,

Example rewrite of your first paragraph:

Thanks for looking to my profile.

I am a well built, educated, and well-mannered professional, looking to please women, and straight couples, who enjoy laughter and social drinking. "

Thanks, updated.

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By *sGivesWoodWoman over a year ago

ST. AUSTELL, CORNWALL

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By *sGivesWoodWoman over a year ago

ST. AUSTELL, CORNWALL

You have recent veris, so obviously working for you.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"You have recent veris, so obviously working for you. "

Thanks, Yeah, but the conversion is 2% lol. 100 messages 10 response and 2 meets haha.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Some guys have been on fab for over a year and still with nothing.. nada.. zero.. nilch.. I wouldn't complain too much lol

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By *sGivesWoodWoman over a year ago

ST. AUSTELL, CORNWALL

"Some guys have been on fab for over a year and still with nothing.. nada.. zero.. nilch.. I wouldn't complain too much lol"

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

We'll thanks ladies and gentleman*. Much appreciated!

Maybe that's the way. You send a 100 messages, a few respond. The fact that I am South Asian also have an impact. People are not racist, but they have their preference and I totally understand that, and of course respect that.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

You don't accommodate. Why's that? Best to say why otherwise some will think you're cheating. You don't say how you intend to meet women.

Hotel? Club? Car? The woman's home?

Dicks all look the same so place them a private. Other pics are nice though.

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By *ophieslutTV/TS over a year ago

Central

You're incredibly new here op, so need to expect things to be this slow - it's tough and slow for all single men, especially when new.

A variety of photos helps people to perceive whether they fancy you - provide the materials so that they can be more sure. If your profile doesn't, many more single guys profiles will.

You're cutting out many people that could be your partners - so you have restricted your potential for success. Change that if you want to improve it.

Your profile doesn't really give me much of a feel for your personality nor what makes you stand above other people they could pick instead. Devote attention to highlighting your great qualities and what the meets interests hold.

Your username may deter some people.

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