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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Although I've had the profile for a while, I've only just started trying to use it for real.
I've had a couple of attempts at writing a bio up until now but upon revision they have often been cringey at best and straight up creepy at worst.
This time I've tried to be a bit more down to earth with it and not bothered with clever lines and am wondering how it looks to someone else.
Any feedback would really be appreciated.  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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I had a feeling it might be, as i say in it i'm probably not the most experienced and don't really want falsely to make out to be. Do you think i went a bit overboard on explaining that or is it other parts of the profile aswell?
Thanks for the feedback anyways |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It’s almosy every line I’m afraid.
Why are you telling us you hardly use your profile. Lack of veris ? It’s not a confident start.
I’m young. I’m inexperienced.
I can’t travel.
I don’t know if this is normal.
I can’t accommodate.
If you want to be honest try....
Young pup looking for cougar who wants to corrupt. My inexperience is your opportunity. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Haha Actually that's a good point, if i cut out the waffle pretty much all I'm saying is negative isn't it.
I'll have another look at it later on to see if i can spin it around a bit.
Thanks again for the feedback and that's a good line I'll use that one. |
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