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Hi all, prob going to revamp my profile & could do with constructive input. I still need to be discrete as I have a VERY public job & don't want to loose it for the sake of £5 lol 
Hmm I shall now assume position for public ridicule lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi , we do totally understand what you are saying regarding face pics but think you could to better if you had some pics in your public gallery and you don't need to show faces
Now you might not be interested but have you considered meeting couples ? As there are a lot of couples who enjoy meeting guys so if that was your thing you would increase your chances of a meet as there are many more couples to single fems
And being a smoker will lose you a few possibles
But do think the main thing is a lack of pics you must remember how many messages single fems get on here and a profile with no pics could just get swept aside |
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Thanks guys. I'll tick the couples bit now as for the smoking I have the odd cigar on a night out & no option for 'social smoker' I could un tick it but after a really good session it's nice to get a little buzz by popping out for a couple of puffs & I wouldn't want to lie |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Hi all, prob going to revamp my profile & could do with constructive input. I still need to be discrete as I have a VERY public job & don't want to loose it for the sake of £5 lol
Hmm I shall now assume position for public ridicule lol"
"VERY public job" are you a lollypop man? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Definitely need more pics on public gallery and no need to show your face. From squinting at your profile pic, you look like you've got a nice body so put some erotic body shots up. Ms |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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As I had nothing else to do and you are a fellow Mancunian I re-drafted your profile for you, but can't email it as you have blocked single males from contacting you.
If you drop me a line I will send it to you.
One other point, single males will sometimes need an extra bloke to meet a lady, and you are shutting yourself out from some fun by blocking them! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Hi all, prob going to revamp my profile & could do with constructive input. I still need to be discrete as I have a VERY public job & don't want to loose it for the sake of £5 lol
Hmm I shall now assume position for public ridicule lol
"VERY public job" are you a lollypop man? "
ooooo a lollypop man  |
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By *abioMan
over a year ago
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"As I had nothing else to do and you are a fellow Mancunian I re-drafted your profile for you, but can't email it as you have blocked single males from contacting you.
If you drop me a line I will send it to you.
One other point, single males will sometimes need an extra bloke to meet a lady, and you are shutting yourself out from some fun by blocking them!"
great... redraft the profile...
only 1 problem.... the profile isn't "him" anymore.... isn't then a generic copy of everything else 
the only thing i tell people, is time, patience, common sense.. and let people figure out the rest for themselves...
a lot can be said for people finding there own way in there own words and learning from there own mistakes... and everytime i see a thread like this, I think people have forgotten that in the drive for minimal effort to get their leg over...
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The profile is him, I have just rearranged the words a little.
I will leave it for the OP to decide whether or not he wants it, but as you haven't seen what I have done what makes you qualified to say it is a generic copy of everything else.
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