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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hello ladies just written a new blurb wondered if any of you would be kind enough to run an eye over it and let me know what you think
Thank you in advance xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'll be honest and say it reads more like something you'd expect to see on a dating site than Fab OP, but if that's the angle you're looking for then it reads well."
I agree. And the I don't bite unless asked is cringey. |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
You've changed it since my previous comment OP and have to say for the better - one thing I would say though is it's all about you and what you want, rather than indicating what you think you can offer.
As Sally said, one of your bucket list items is easily fixed, and may actually lead to ticking off some of the others. |
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