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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Hi just wanted some feedback on my profile from all of you out there. I always can do with a bit of constructive criticism thanks in advance

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By *RIDAY NIGHT LADYWoman  over a year ago

Bolton

View your profile and read it as if you were looking to meet your self and think would I meet be interested.

For me your profile text is very difficult to understand and that is the first thing that I look at.

If not written well then I delete that message.

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By *allySlinkyWoman  over a year ago

Leeds

Your profile needs more punctuation.

Also I don't think we are all here for the same thing so that would put me off messaging you.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Lol thanks both looks like a full rewrite is in order!!!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Hate to see 'we're all here for the same' thats not true.

99 years old? Would you really meet someone of that age?

Your text ssys nothing about what you enjoy or what your looking for.

It also ssys nothing about what you can offer a potential meet and why they should chat/meet you over any of the other 100 guys around.

Poppy

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