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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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I have just been going through some of the advice forums for profiles and thought hey I do need mine doing
I have played about with it just wondering what people think and if I can improve it any more
Thank you fabbers  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hiya...ok being picky here...
Take out the bit about posting a status, it's irrelevant.
No older then 33 and lower...this reads weird (then should be than) and you don't need to say 'and lower', this is implied. Change your age preferences to reflect your actual age preferences and then you don't need to say it at all. In the message filters, don't block outside of your age preferences, if you are ok with a woman older than 33 seducing you.
Take out the last sentence about spelling mistakes, it made me go back and recheck your spelling...
Take a pic of the beard if you are asking for advice...doesn't have to be of your full face. You could crop from your nose down and show a smile  |
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