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By *ieman300Man
over a year ago
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There is a typo. out should be our regarding your journey.
Overall it sounds like you are talking yourselves down at every opportunity. I wonder if you are trying to avoid sounding too good to be true and taking it to far the other way. It is just too cold and bland.
My advice is re word everything with a positive head on. It just really comes across as ok if we must here is something about us.
I hope you find that constructive and understand what I am trying to say. I am sure you are a lot nicer than you seem to give yourselves credit for  . |
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