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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"So what's wrong with my profile?"
What's right with it!!.... 
Not a lot, definitely needs some work, dull, boring and tells us nothing of interest.
Ehy should someone pick you over all the other 1000s of guys on its site?
It's a very forgettable profile.
Good luck
Poppy.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Loving the constructive critisism, ill take your feedback back to the lab"
if you want constructive, here goes...
I would lose the first line as it makes you seem a bit of a big head, and you could lose the third line as it makes no sense..
try saying what you like and enjoy doing and what type of woman you are looking for...
as for punching above your weight? wtf does that mean
just bear in mind you are literally one in 1000's of men all looking for someone to connect with so you need to make your profile stand out...
and sadly yours doesn't
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How does vol2 sound?"
better as you are showing more of your personality but please, please, please lose the Mr Grey namecheck if you want to be taken seriously on here...
most think its a joke on here |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"How does vol2 sound?
better as you are showing more of your personality but please, please, please lose the Mr Grey namecheck if you want to be taken seriously on here...
most think its a joke on here "
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