Hi and welcome to fab.
Some of your photos are lovely - the one's that are just of you. I would leave off the ones with other people in them, you don't really need them unless it's a couples profile.
I wouldn't recommend asking for someone to take you along to a club. Generally when men do that they get told to grow a pair and go on their own.
Try to expand on your profile a bit. Your profile is your opportunity to sell yourself. Also what attracts you to a potential meet? We all have preferences so putting them on your profile can help. Just bear in mind that it is better to be positive about what you do like rather than list what you don't.
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
It's not bad, but is much the same as a lot of other single guy profiles at the same time - really need to sell yourself, and get some of your own personality across to help you stand out.
The thing about your interests being listed but suggesting people ask questions if they want to know more is a little lazy too - might be a way of providing more detail rather than expecting people to ask.
I'd also remove the line about wanting someone to show you around clubs, reads a little like you're looking for someone to get you in to the club on a couples ticket, rather than being interested in them as a person.
Your pics are pretty good for the most part, but a lot of people will be put off of the ones of you with another woman, almost smacks of showing off previous conquests.
Hope that's a help.
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By *amissCouple
over a year ago
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"Thank you. I will try to re arrange the profile now. "
Well looks like you have taken advise on board. I actually am impressed with it. You have made an effort to get it right and I personally think it is very well thought out and written. Not keen on tattoos myself, but I know there will be many who are, but still like your pics. I wish you luck and fun, young man!  |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
Impressive OP - not only that you have taken the advice on board (which trust me most that ask for it don't!!) but at the changes you have made - reads really well now.
If I were to be really picky though you've missed two "a's" out of your first sentence one before "good sense of humour" and one before "few tattoos" - the first doesn't really matter but the second changes the suggestion from the reality.
The only other comment I'd make is your first pic the focus is on the lady not you, all we can see of you is the top of your head and your hand - it's a great pic but maybe not for a single guy profile for the reasons I gave above - likewise your avatar pic.
Either way good job and good luck |
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"Impressive OP - not only that you have taken the advice on board (which trust me most that ask for it don't!!) but at the changes you have made - reads really well now.
If I were to be really picky though you've missed two "a's" out of your first sentence one before "good sense of humour" and one before "few tattoos" - the first doesn't really matter but the second changes the suggestion from the reality.
The only other comment I'd make is your first pic the focus is on the lady not you, all we can see of you is the top of your head and your hand - it's a great pic but maybe not for a single guy profile for the reasons I gave above - likewise your avatar pic.
Either way good job and good luck "
Thanks again. I am doing my best to write well in English but I have only moved here 9 years ago. And sometimes just cannot help all these "a's". If you see me doing any grammar mistakes please do correct me. Many thanks. |
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"Thank you. I will try to re arrange the profile now.
Well looks like you have taken advise on board. I actually am impressed with it. You have made an effort to get it right and I personally think it is very well thought out and written. Not keen on tattoos myself, but I know there will be many who are, but still like your pics. I wish you luck and fun, young man! "
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By *amissCouple
over a year ago
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"Thank you. I will try to re arrange the profile now.
Well looks like you have taken advise on board. I actually am impressed with it. You have made an effort to get it right and I personally think it is very well thought out and written. Not keen on tattoos myself, but I know there will be many who are, but still like your pics. I wish you luck and fun, young man!
Thank you "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I rarely message guys these days but combined with the pics (I'm a sucker for a guy with tats) and the text, its the kind of profile I would message. All the best on here my lovely |
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"I rarely message guys these days but combined with the pics (I'm a sucker for a guy with tats) and the text, its the kind of profile I would message. All the best on here my lovely "
Haha where is the message ?  |
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