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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey guys just here looking for some honest advice about my profile.Im really struggling to get to know people.Is there something I'm lacking on here....feel free to be honest |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Alright I've been told that about the description trying to improve it now "
so i see...it's oddly familiar...still, great you managed to knock out all that text so incredibly quickly! |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
To be honest OP, I think your blurb isn't bad, although it does read a little like so many other single male profiles, you need to try and get some of your personality across and make yourself stand out.
I do think though that you should remove the following line:
"PLEASE TAKE NOTE ONLY NON-TIME WASTING, drama-free, erotic and sexually oral loving exciting sensual people need to apply"
For one do you really think that time wasters or drama queens will think "oh wait he doesn't want the likes of us to contact him" and pass you by?
Suggesting that people should "apply" comes across as a little arrogant also.
As for your pics, I'd have a rethink and remove the cock ones, and the one of you bateback with someone - it'll put off a lot of people. Your other pics don't really do a great deal for you either - consider taking some that show off your body and not your cock. |
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