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By *ocal manchester guy OP Man over a year ago

stockport

hey peeps! i'll apologise in advance because i know this topic keeps cropping up but i've recently updated my profile and i would really appreciate some feedback. i know my pics really dont do me justice so i'll be adding some new ones shortly but any feedback on my bio would be greatly appreciated.

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By *inkySlinkyCouple over a year ago

Leeds

A very detailed and well written profile. Have you considered using a capital "I" as most people do?

Sally

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Great profile

Informative but not too much info

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By *hubaysiWoman over a year ago

Leeds

Nice pics but you need to look at your grammar, spelling and punctuation, e.g. initial capitals after a full stop.

Very detailed text of what you want etc.

Good luck OP.

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By *ocal manchester guy OP Man over a year ago

stockport

Thank you. To be honest, my grammer, spelling and punctuation is normally very good. It's just the way my phone types. I do notice it, just don't tend to correct it. Thank you for the feedback though.

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By *ocal manchester guy OP Man over a year ago

stockport

Likewise. Thank you very much.

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By *ocal manchester guy OP Man over a year ago

stockport

Thank you for the feedback and advise everyone. Very helpful

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

So you are only seeking submissives?

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