Would sum of u ladies be kind enough to take a look at my profile and give me abit ov profile help. Been on here for a while but am finding it quite hard to draw the attention and keep it from the ladies. Any ladies wanting to pop my fab cherry too can just slide into my inbox lol |
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"Drop the capitals except at the beginning of the sentences, break it down into 'paragraphs'.
Yes this and more public pics. Not all cock ones though.
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Definitely lose the over-capitalising as it makes it painful to read. Also try and chat/find your voice a bit more in your profile text - it's all a bit 'soundbites' and as if you're writing on a telegram and only have so many words you can use. It just feels stilted.
Some more pics, perhaps lose cock pic number two and have more of face/eyes/chest/bum depending what you're willing to show.
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I couldn't bring myself to read the text, all those capitals make it hard work.
The fact the first two pics are uninspiring cock shots gave me a poor initial impression as I start at the top and work down.
Finally in your 30s and unable to accommodate would have me wondering why, attached? You don't have to but addressing that might help the naturally cynical. |
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Thank you for the constructive criticism which is what I am looking for but there are a lot of saddos who are inboxing me and then blocking me with borderline abuse about my profile. Pretty sad but it's the world we live in lol also I am a double graduate which a lot of these inbox warriors keep challenging me on because my profile isn't written in 'correct english' lol. A persons intelligence has nothing to do with the way they choose to write a profile and if someone was to judge me from how I've wrote on my profile then they refrain from inboxing me their stupidness. Once again thanks again for the constructive criticism on this thread and this reply is aimed at the inbox warriors and not he people on the thread  |
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"Thank you for the constructive criticism which is what I am looking for but there are a lot of saddos who are inboxing me and then blocking me with borderline abuse about my profile. Pretty sad but it's the world we live in lol also I am a double graduate which a lot of these inbox warriors keep challenging me on because my profile isn't written in 'correct english' lol. A persons intelligence has nothing to do with the way they choose to write a profile and if someone was to judge me from how I've wrote on my profile then they refrain from inboxing me their stupidness. Once again thanks again for the constructive criticism on this thread and this reply is aimed at the inbox warriors and not he people on the thread "
Block and report them, sad that you should get this but fortunately the good on here outweigh the bad.
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"Thank you for the constructive criticism which is what I am looking for but there are a lot of saddos who are inboxing me and then blocking me with borderline abuse about my profile. Pretty sad but it's the world we live in lol also I am a double graduate which a lot of these inbox warriors keep challenging me on because my profile isn't written in 'correct english' lol. A persons intelligence has nothing to do with the way they choose to write a profile and if someone was to judge me from how I've wrote on my profile then they refrain from inboxing me their stupidness. Once again thanks again for the constructive criticism on this thread and this reply is aimed at the inbox warriors and not he people on the thread
Block and report them, sad that you should get this but fortunately the good on here outweigh the bad.
Good luck. "
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A lot of people would say the double graduate thing is totally irrelevant on here so if it's getting you criticism why not take it out? Filters are also your friend, and any abuse should be reported (although I suspect what constitutes abuse is as open to interpretation as what constitutes a timewaster) |
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"Would sum of u ladies be kind enough to take a look at my profile and give me abit ov profile help. Been on here for a while but am finding it quite hard to draw the attention and keep it from the ladies. Any ladies wanting to pop my fab cherry too can just slide into my inbox lol "
I'm still finding the text difficult to understand as you've capitalised every word, yet have no paragraphs.
Your implication is of good education yet this isn't apparent in the outlay or context.
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Hi everyone am not having much luck on here can anyone look at my profile and tell me what needs changing as I must be doing something wrong as am getting know where on this site? |
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"Hi everyone am not having much luck on here can anyone look at my profile and tell me what needs changing as I must be doing something wrong as am getting know where on this site?"
Why not start a new post of your own ?
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