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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi I'm still very new to all this so please can u take some time to look thoug my profile n just advise me on how I come across n what your thoughts are much apriciated thanks Richard |
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It's better than lots. If I were being critical, I'd say most people don't want to take on a trainee, and your job and your move 1/2 down the road isn't important.
Get a meet veri at a club or social as soon as you can.
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
Pics aren't bad OP and at least avoid the obvious cock shot, maybe a few more along the same lines from different angles would work.
Profile blurb is better than most, but does come across like you don't know what you're doing a little - you need to get across who you are, what you are looking for and what you can offer a little better.
You also have a lot of "I" in there which makes it all sound a bit me, me, me.
I'd drop the "so who knows could always drop in and give you a good service too hehe" line too...sounds like something out of a 1970s Confessions film!!
Your explanation of why you can't accomodate would also lead me to question if as well as your little girl, you also have a wife/partner at home, so you might want to clarify that.
In summary you need to sell yourself and make yourself stand out from the crowd a little better.  |
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