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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Op, sorry but you're profile is rubbish.
Say something about yourself and what you're hoping to find.
Lose the anorak photo - tells the viewer absolutely nothing, except that you have an anorak - and get some decent photos instead.
What on earth is the second photo about? (photo mods, what were you thinking when you approved it?) |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
To be honest if that's an improvement then I dread to think what the original was like!! You need to think of your profile as a shop window and ask yourself honestly if you'd go into your shop having looked in the window? I certainly wouldn't!! It tells the reader nothing of who you are, what you're looking for and what you think you can offer.
For ideas take a look around at other well verified single guy profiles and come up with something of your own.
You need better pictures too that show off your body - again look at other successful single guy profiles for ideas.
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By *ir1967Man
over a year ago
in da sticks, london, amsterdam, madrid |
Seems added some text , but....pretty each line or sentence starts with I
Hmm, reading it sound like "me, myself and I"
Since I am not a native English speaker I am not sure whether you get away with it but in my home country your profile text would be very much interpreted as - this guy is on an ego trip -
Just saying, but hey, with 19 years on a swinger site, who knows what you might coukd bring to the table to make the party rock...
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