Hello, so today I realised my profile had been very minimalistic for too long and islet some time redoing it today. Would anyone please take a look at it and tell me what they think? If they like how it sounds or would they recommend changing it up? Any help is appreciated cheers
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OP your profile text looks fine to me but you could improve your photos.
You only have one cock, you don't need 10 pictures of it.
Every man on here has a cock and yours is no more special than anyone else's. Us ladies aren't going to come flocking to you just because you show us lots of pictures of it. If anything it puts a lot of ladies off.
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By *amissCouple
over a year ago
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"OP I think I gave you advice on someone else's thread that you asked for it on, so can I refer you to that? As it still stands. that wasn't me, although I had seen that thread "
It was you, check your green arrow, it will show other threads you have posted to. I think the advise he gave you there, was spot on. Good luck! |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
Just in case you can't find it OP have copy/pasted the advice you asked for from the other thread:
You said: "After reading the comments here, I've just spent a little time updating my profile text, could you possibly have a look and see what you think of mine? Cheers x"
My advice: For starters I'd ditch the cock pics, especially the ones of you clutching it - they're not great to be honest.
Would give some thought to re-writing your profile blurb too - it reads like a bit of a ramble currently. For example in the paragraph addressing "Single ladies" you have used "here on" or "on here" about five times!!
Try and think of your blurb as a shop window that entices people to enter the shop, laying out who you are, what you are looking for, and most importantly what you can offer in one neat package.
You also use the word "curious" a lot and yet make no reference to your bi-curiousity - so might want to address both those things too.
Good luck"
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By *amissCouple
over a year ago
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"Just in case you can't find it OP have copy/pasted the advice you asked for from the other thread:
You said: "After reading the comments here, I've just spent a little time updating my profile text, could you possibly have a look and see what you think of mine? Cheers x"
My advice: For starters I'd ditch the cock pics, especially the ones of you clutching it - they're not great to be honest.
Would give some thought to re-writing your profile blurb too - it reads like a bit of a ramble currently. For example in the paragraph addressing "Single ladies" you have used "here on" or "on here" about five times!!
Try and think of your blurb as a shop window that entices people to enter the shop, laying out who you are, what you are looking for, and most importantly what you can offer in one neat package.
You also use the word "curious" a lot and yet make no reference to your bi-curiousity - so might want to address both those things too.
Good luck"
You're welcome "
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
"Just in case you can't find it OP have copy/pasted the advice you asked for from the other thread:
You said: "After reading the comments here, I've just spent a little time updating my profile text, could you possibly have a look and see what you think of mine? Cheers x"
My advice: For starters I'd ditch the cock pics, especially the ones of you clutching it - they're not great to be honest.
Would give some thought to re-writing your profile blurb too - it reads like a bit of a ramble currently. For example in the paragraph addressing "Single ladies" you have used "here on" or "on here" about five times!!
Try and think of your blurb as a shop window that entices people to enter the shop, laying out who you are, what you are looking for, and most importantly what you can offer in one neat package.
You also use the word "curious" a lot and yet make no reference to your bi-curiousity - so might want to address both those things too.
Good luck"
You're welcome
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Well sometimes you have to lead a horse to water even if you can't make it drink!! |
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By *amissCouple
over a year ago
chelmsford |
"Just in case you can't find it OP have copy/pasted the advice you asked for from the other thread:
You said: "After reading the comments here, I've just spent a little time updating my profile text, could you possibly have a look and see what you think of mine? Cheers x"
My advice: For starters I'd ditch the cock pics, especially the ones of you clutching it - they're not great to be honest.
Would give some thought to re-writing your profile blurb too - it reads like a bit of a ramble currently. For example in the paragraph addressing "Single ladies" you have used "here on" or "on here" about five times!!
Try and think of your blurb as a shop window that entices people to enter the shop, laying out who you are, what you are looking for, and most importantly what you can offer in one neat package.
You also use the word "curious" a lot and yet make no reference to your bi-curiousity - so might want to address both those things too.
Good luck"
You're welcome
Well sometimes you have to lead a horse to water even if you can't make it drink!! "
That's so true! |
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