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In need of a profile review!

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Hi guys I'm new to this and it would be great if you lot could give me advice on my profile and how to start conversations with people! Thanks :D

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Never ask a lady to tell you what she likes. Pics arent great. Not a lot of content. Grammer not good so didnt understsnd some of it.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Never ask a lady to tell you what she likes. Pics arent great. Not a lot of content. Grammer not good so didnt understsnd some of it."

Apart from that it's fine

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Ok not a lot wrong then haha :')

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Never ask a lady to tell you what she likes. Pics arent great. Not a lot of content. Grammer not good so didnt understsnd some of it."

Is the bio any better now?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Still a couple of grammar issues

I'd work on the pics too, the angles aren't flattering

I love dorks though, being a dweeb myself

Good luck

Ruby

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By *emini ManMan  over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

To give a male perspective OP - current pics aren't bad - maybe add to those with more in the same vein though and avoid cock pics in your public ones.

As for your profile blurb - being honest it reads more like a dating ad than someone looking for NSA (if that's what you're looking for of course) - try and amend it to cover more about what you're looking to get out of the site, but also what you can offer to any prospective viewers. Take a look around at other male profiles for ideas of what might work. Oh and yeah you need to correct some of the grammar issues.

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