Still a few spelling a cd grammatical errors. I as in myself should be uppercase. "Interested" is incorrectly spelt and a space after each full stop makes it easier to read.

I'm nit picking I know but a single male needs to make a greater effort than anyone to get things right because the ladies get so many men after them they discard for the slightest thing. Even wearing a pair of stockings puts some off.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Still no smile... you just trying to get a smile out of me lool just uploading a pic with a smile now x smile pics done

At last you've actually listened! Much better, haven't read the profile though

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thank you for helping me hun x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Good profile , nice pics , very appealing .

Would have preferred to see at least one cock pic though .

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"hay i done a profile update can you check to see if it is ok now please thanks in advance x"

We think because we are not looking for single guys we are in an ideal position to give you profile critique!

Let's start with the great things. Very good photos. You haven't gone the silly single man way of loads of cock photos. You have presented yourself very well in your photos, and great to see open smiling face photos.

Next the good things. It is good to see you can accommodate. Coupled with the open face photos you present yourself as a true single guy rather than a 'single playing alone'.

Now the only fair bit. Add some more meat to your profile. Take advantage of all your plus points and create yourself a great profile rather than just a good one.

We are sure by doing that you will have success.

Good luck!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Not read the profile sorry ..just looked at the pics and fabbed the ones i liked

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"hay i done a profile update can you check to see if it is ok now please thanks in advance x

We think because we are not looking for single guys we are in an ideal position to give you profile critique!

Next the good things. It is good to see you can accommodate. Coupled with the open face photos you present yourself as a true single guy rather than a 'single playing alone'.

Now the only fair bit. Add some more meat to your profile. Take advantage of all your plus points and create yourself a great profile rather than just a good one.

We are sure by doing that you will have success.

Good luck!"
thanks everyone i do apreshate the help

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"hay i done a profile update can you check to see if it is ok now please thanks in advance x

We think because we are not looking for single guys we are in an ideal position to give you profile critique!

Next the good things. It is good to see you can accommodate. Coupled with the open face photos you present yourself as a true single guy rather than a 'single playing alone'.

Now the only fair bit. Add some more meat to your profile. Take advantage of all your plus points and create yourself a great profile rather than just a good one.

We are sure by doing that you will have success.

Good luck! thanks everyone i do apreshate the help"

Good pics. Beige text. Why is fun a bonus? I prefer fun to be the aim.

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By *edRidingWolfCouple over a year ago

Lydney

Can only echo what has already been said.

Pics are good.

Text is boring.

Red x

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