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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea

To 2 people thanks for the spell help you have givvon me in the parts days. You no hoo you r. A large thanks agen.

As lots of people sed my profile wos a bit negitive I've tried to mak it less negitive.

Wood like your vous plees

I no the spelling in parts is bad.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman  over a year ago

little house on the praire

I think you should get your friend to help you. It seems to be the same apart from the interests bit.

Some of it is harder to read than yesterdays but you have spelt country correctly

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"I think you should get your friend to help you. It seems to be the same apart from the interests bit.

Some of it is harder to read than yesterdays but you have spelt country correctly"

The interests bit is the new bit and I've cut out the negative stuff and treeked a cupall of lines in wot I think is the inporntount stuff.

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman  over a year ago

little house on the praire

Op, you know your dyslexia is severe. There are adult learning groups, for people who struggle for various reasons.

There is also different sorts of equipment and i dont know what sort of work you do but employers make provisions.

Its not your fault you have dyslexia but there are tools out there. It may be worth you looking into

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea

It's not that survear its just my spelling and reeding manley. A side effect of it is im a verry quik Lurner with pratlall things (hands on stuff). wot plays up most is my asburgirs. And as I work with a agentcey and at jobs keep changing it plays up a lot. But my agent nos this.

As for corssers I have been on them but thay just don't work for my tip of disleksik. As Thar r lots of forms of it.

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By *inkySlinkyCouple  over a year ago

Leeds

OP I love it that you spell the fast food chain "Muckdonolds". Sally.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x"

I wont tak it the wrong way. Witch bit is awwwww ??????? And y thoe ????

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x

I wont tak it the wrong way. Witch bit is awwwww ??????? And y thoe ????"

The whole aspergers/dyslexia/shy/work long hours/I'm a nice guy/no transport etc. ...there is nothing wrong at all with any of those things....It's just when I read your profile I didn't think this was the place for you.....I think this is a swinging site and I know there are different levels and stages of swinging but with some of your difficulties your more suited to a dating site where someone can appreciate you....again i mean no malice x

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea

Well thanks for your thorts eneyway.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Well thanks for your thorts eneyway."

Your very welcome....good luck with everything and have a lovely day at work. Mrs A x

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea

Y is this not in the Forum eney mor ??????????

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Y is this not in the Forum eney mor ??????????"

OP you have spelt some words correctly in some sentences and not in others...

the profile is still a bit rambly, there is no need to mention you are shy, and we all know what you allude to from your posts yesterday, when you say you don't have too much experience...

unfortunately that wont endear you to many people so cut that out, and also you get out what you put in so try and message people, and also explain you are dyslexic and see if they will give you feedback, even if they wont meet you it might help your confidence...

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x

I wont tak it the wrong way. Witch bit is awwwww ??????? And y thoe ????

The whole aspergers/dyslexia/shy/work long hours/I'm a nice guy/no transport etc. ...there is nothing wrong at all with any of those things....It's just when I read your profile I didn't think this was the place for you.....I think this is a swinging site and I know there are different levels and stages of swinging but with some of your difficulties your more suited to a dating site where someone can appreciate you....again i mean no malice x"

No malice here, either, but I did think the same.

OP, your tag line "I am one of those rare nice guys" is not good. Nice guys really are not rare and trying to put others down to score points is not a nice quality.

Concentrate on what you can offer rather than what you seem to perceive as your limitations.

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"Y is this not in the Forum eney mor ??????????

OP you have spelt some words correctly in some sentences and not in others...

the profile is still a bit rambly, there is no need to mention you are shy, and we all know what you allude to from your posts yesterday, when you say you don't have too much experience...

unfortunately that wont endear you to many people so cut that out, and also you get out what you put in so try and message people, and also explain you are dyslexic and see if they will give you feedback, even if they wont meet you it might help your confidence..."

I do see your point on the experience bit but I dont want to leed people off so thay think or expecting sumthing. that i may not be up to standourds to wot thay expect on a meet. And Thar by be a disarpointmount.

I gess I can cut the shy bit out but it mite pant a pitcher that is not me. And like befor I don't want to disarpoint eney one making them think im sumthing im not.

Dus this make sense to you ?

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By *enard ArgenteMan  over a year ago

London and France


"OP I love it that you spell the fast food chain "Muckdonolds". Sally."

Yes! I don't know if that was intentional , or an accident as a result of your dyslexia; but it is a stroke of genius!

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"OP I love it that you spell the fast food chain "Muckdonolds". Sally.

Yes! I don't know if that was intentional , or an accident as a result of your dyslexia; but it is a stroke of genius!

"

It wos not on purpours but if its good ill keep it.

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By *enard ArgenteMan  over a year ago

London and France


"OP I love it that you spell the fast food chain "Muckdonolds". Sally.

Yes! I don't know if that was intentional , or an accident as a result of your dyslexia; but it is a stroke of genius!

It wos not on purpours but if its good ill keep it."

Please do .

And I am going to steal that joke and use it myself!

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"OP I love it that you spell the fast food chain "Muckdonolds". Sally.

Yes! I don't know if that was intentional , or an accident as a result of your dyslexia; but it is a stroke of genius!

It wos not on purpours but if its good ill keep it.

Please do .

And I am going to steal that joke and use it myself!"

1 its not ment to be a joke

2 Y still it ?????

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By *anoffee pieWoman  over a year ago

baking pies in my kitchen

I read part of your profile and it read well. Whoever helped you should really be thanked.

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By *irty130Couple  over a year ago

Bristol Area

Hey OP, have you considered using the dictation feature on your phone to do a lot of your typing?

On the iphone it's the microphone symbol next to the spacebar when you have the keyboard open.

Just a thought! It's actually faster than typing (especially if you can't touch-type) a lot of the time!

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"Hey OP, have you considered using the dictation feature on your phone to do a lot of your typing?

On the iphone it's the microphone symbol next to the spacebar when you have the keyboard open.

Just a thought! It's actually faster than typing (especially if you can't touch-type) a lot of the time!"

Thanks never thort of that. I got a smart fone thoe not a I fone but wen I get sum time ill have a look for it cos the settings on this thing is like a maze at times.lol

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

OP I just reread your profile and noticed that although well written it had reverted back to what it was originally?

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"OP I just reread your profile and noticed that although well written it had reverted back to what it was originally? "

It's up to date on my profile ?????? I cut out most of the negative stuff and put sum stuff about me and wot I like ??????? R u Shor ???????

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By *istress-MazikeenWoman  over a year ago

bolton


"It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x"

I have to agree with this, with Aspergers, being shy and not one to message first, you are expecting a lot. This is not a dating site, and meeting after 10 at night is not the best way of meeting.

Look around Margate and see other ways of getting out and about to meet people.

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x

I have to agree with this, with Aspergers, being shy and not one to message first, you are expecting a lot. This is not a dating site, and meeting after 10 at night is not the best way of meeting.

Look around Margate and see other ways of getting out and about to meet people."

I just red your profile and you seem to be on hear for a simlour resoun as me. And seem to be in simourlour condishouns to (eg) just publik transport ' shoshall meet 1st ect. I dont get how u say its not a dating site with your profile ?????

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By *istress-MazikeenWoman  over a year ago

bolton


"It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x

I have to agree with this, with Aspergers, being shy and not one to message first, you are expecting a lot. This is not a dating site, and meeting after 10 at night is not the best way of meeting.

Look around Margate and see other ways of getting out and about to meet people.

I just red your profile and you seem to be on hear for a simlour resoun as me. And seem to be in simourlour condishouns to (eg) just publik transport ' shoshall meet 1st ect. I dont get how u say its not a dating site with your profile ?????"

Quite simple I am not looking for a partner or full on relationship and it says that in my profile.

I have my preferences as in fet side more.

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"It's better than the one you had before but I did go awwwww through most of it and felt a bit sorry for you..you seem like a lovely genuine guy but I'm not actually sure this is the right site for you.....hope you don't take this the wrong way x

I have to agree with this, with Aspergers, being shy and not one to message first, you are expecting a lot. This is not a dating site, and meeting after 10 at night is not the best way of meeting.

Look around Margate and see other ways of getting out and about to meet people.

I just red your profile and you seem to be on hear for a simlour resoun as me. And seem to be in simourlour condishouns to (eg) just publik transport ' shoshall meet 1st ect. I dont get how u say its not a dating site with your profile ?????

Quite simple I am not looking for a partner or full on relationship and it says that in my profile.

I have my preferences as in fet side more."

I ment no afence all I ment wos the resoun your on hear is like mine looking for sum 1 or mabey a cupall of people just to spend sum time with as long as Thar is sum sort of spark. Nothing serous unless that spark grows. So undder that thort it seems odd for u to tell me its not a dating site wen you seem to be looking for the same thing. Onley difrounce in my vue is im willing to just have a quik meet as well but wood purfar a soshall 1st.

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By *unandbuckCouple  over a year ago

Sheffield

All credit to you OP. There are lots of guys who come on asking for profile advice, after they've written a crappy 2 line profile.

Despite it obviously being tricky for you, you have stuck with it, and tried to include lots of the suggestions.

Good luck

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By *eeside OP   Man  over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea


"All credit to you OP. There are lots of guys who come on asking for profile advice, after they've written a crappy 2 line profile.

Despite it obviously being tricky for you, you have stuck with it, and tried to include lots of the suggestions.

Good luck "

Thank you.

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