Had a few disparaging remarks about my profile these past few weeks.
Didn’t think it was that bad, kept it short-ish with a bit of light humour
Maybe the pics could be better?
I’m open to any constructive criticism or tips on how to improve it. If anybody would be kind enough to _iew it.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The first paragraph is awful. In my head you're saying all that stuff really fast and it sounds a bit desperate.
I didn't read the rest because that but put me off :/ |
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"Had a few disparaging remarks about my profile these past few weeks.
Didn’t think it was that bad, kept it short-ish with a bit of light humour
Maybe the pics could be better?
I’m open to any constructive criticism or tips on how to improve it. If anybody would be kind enough to _iew it.
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If it reflects you then nothing needs changing at all  |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
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The first paragraph is really garbled and needs a rewrite!
Pics not good at all, I'm sure that you can do better, we don't want to see yet another cock, and the last picture I would guess would not be attractive to any ladies at all, its not a pleasant _iew! Sorry  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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" Making claims of extravagant sexual prowess seems boastful and quite desperate and doesn't tell anybody about you as a person like a decent profile should."
Totally agreed! What Is all that business about candy crush? |
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over a year ago
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Start the profile from the bit that says 'im a single healthy guy' ......delete all the stuff above that, its not really breaking the ice, its more dating site banter.
I do understand what you mean, but there are so many guys on here looking for the same thing you need to make your profile better ( or as good) as the others.
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