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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"If any one could give me a hand to improve my profile it would be greatly appreciated."
Half your profile consists of the pointless disclaimer. The rest just says any hole is a goal. Give out some information. Show some personality. It doesn't all have to be sexual.
You have no public pictures. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"If any one could give me a hand to improve my profile it would be greatly appreciated.
Half your profile consists of the pointless disclaimer. The rest just says any hole is a goal. Give out some information. Show some personality. It doesn't all have to be sexual.
You have no public pictures."
This. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Rewrote it sorry to be a pain but if you guys could have another look it'd be a massive help"
Much better than it was.
It would be a bit hard though for a lady to see if she might have a connection with you. Perhaps something more social about you - what you do in your spare time, the sort of person you are?
And the photo is a bit glum. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Rewrote it sorry to be a pain but if you guys could have another look it'd be a massive help"
It reads much better!!
One thing though, take the legal stuff out. It doesn't mean anything.
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