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Any critiques? Need feedback on my profile.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Hi guys, I'm fairly new to fabswingers. Is there any critiques out there that could give me constructive feedback on my profile text/public pictures? All advice and tips would be taken.

Alec

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By *ady LickWoman  over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

I like your profile text but the pics make me feel like it's a couples profile.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"I like your profile text but the pics make me feel like it's a couples profile. "

Yes that's true, I have had pictures up of just me but that hasn't really worked. Just trying to take a different approach. However, thanks for the feedback

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Hi guys, I'm fairly new to fabswingers. Is there any critiques out there that could give me constructive feedback on my profile text/public pictures? All advice and tips would be taken.

Alec"

Not bad at all - but, yes, too much of your previous meets in your pictures.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Hi guys, I'm fairly new to fabswingers. Is there any critiques out there that could give me constructive feedback on my profile text/public pictures? All advice and tips would be taken.

Alec

Not bad at all - but, yes, too much of your previous meets in your pictures."

What sort of pictures would you recommend? Body shots?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Hi guys, I'm fairly new to fabswingers. Is there any critiques out there that could give me constructive feedback on my profile text/public pictures? All advice and tips would be taken.

Alec

Not bad at all - but, yes, too much of your previous meets in your pictures.

What sort of pictures would you recommend? Body shots?"

Yes, just not pictures exclusively of you with a partner.

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By *icecouple561Couple  over a year ago
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East Sussex

Smart and assertive ...good

persistent...not so sure.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Smart and assertive ...good

persistent...not so sure."

Haha hmm, any suggestions? :P

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By *icecouple561Couple  over a year ago
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"Smart and assertive ...good

persistent...not so sure.

Haha hmm, any suggestions? :P"

Just miss persistent off, persistence is great if you're a marathon runner but lots of women have experience bod persistent men that is less than positive.

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By *icecouple561Couple  over a year ago
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Of not bod

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Smart and assertive ...good

persistent...not so sure.

Haha hmm, any suggestions? :P

Just miss persistent off, persistence is great if you're a marathon runner but lots of women have experience bod persistent men that is less than positive."

Yes I understand, thanks for the tips and advice, much obliged.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Personally i would take off the bit that says "do you love to travel too?" It doesn't seem to fit with the rest of your profile maybe putting it a different way would flow better.

And I would take the pics of you with another woman off, you can't see much of you in them anyway.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Personally i would take off the bit that says "do you love to travel too?" It doesn't seem to fit with the rest of your profile maybe putting it a different way would flow better.

And I would take the pics of you with another woman off, you can't see much of you in them anyway. "

Yes I have taken that out now and changed the pictures around, thanks for the tips

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Much better

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