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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hello ladies and gentlemen I've finally got my profile sorted and was hoping people could tell me what they think what needs changing what can I do to make it stand out any advice is welcome  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Agree with 'killer' in username. A couple of comma's and full stops would be cool, I ran out of breath, lol. The statement 'I'm headstrong but I know what I want', not sure how that invites swinging interest. A good attempt for a first profile though  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"ffs how many of these are we going too see and try to help simple thing too do is ie look on other feed backs "
He is new to the site, he isn't forum savvy. He is doing just fine, he is getting replies to his post. Something your last four opening posts didn't get. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Some more punctuation would make it easier to read, the text is OK but isn't a stand out at the moment.
The cap pics are distracting, and would rather see a smile, makes you more approachable. The lack.of cock pics is refreshing. |
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"It wasn't a bed it was boxs and bags as I have just moved but that is now sorted my home is tidy "
My balls are quite tidy.  fancy your home and my balls having something in common! Just another of life's cheeky tweeks, eh?  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Some more punctuation would make it easier to read, the text is OK but isn't a stand out at the moment.
The cap pics are distracting, and would rather see a smile, makes you more approachable. The lack.of cock pics is refreshing. "
thanks I shall get round to sorting the punctuation out and I believe somethings should be left for after a meet |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Some more punctuation would make it easier to read, the text is OK but isn't a stand out at the moment.
The cap pics are distracting, and would rather see a smile, makes you more approachable. The lack.of cock pics is refreshing.
thanks I shall get round to sorting the punctuation out and I believe somethings should be left for after a meet "
You show your penis after the meet? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Some more punctuation would make it easier to read, the text is OK but isn't a stand out at the moment.
The cap pics are distracting, and would rather see a smile, makes you more approachable. The lack.of cock pics is refreshing.
thanks I shall get round to sorting the punctuation out and I believe somethings should be left for after a meet "
You're welcome. Some women will love that approach, others want an idea of what they're getting in advance, go with what works for you. Maybe a couple of teasing shots that don't quite reveal but hint would be good... |
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over a year ago
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"Some more punctuation would make it easier to read, the text is OK but isn't a stand out at the moment.
The cap pics are distracting, and would rather see a smile, makes you more approachable. The lack.of cock pics is refreshing.
thanks I shall get round to sorting the punctuation out and I believe somethings should be left for after a meet
You show your penis after the meet?"
I don't think you got what I meant by that |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"seems to me if you don't have a six pack, 10 inch cock or a load of money your wasting your time! "
Have to disagree on all counts, especially money. While I have a good idea of people's physiques by the time we meet I have no clue about their disposable income and couldn't give a damn. And VWE and six pack are definitely not requirements for us. |
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"seems to me if you don't have a six pack, 10 inch cock or a load of money your wasting your time!
Have to disagree on all counts, especially money. While I have a good idea of people's physiques by the time we meet I have no clue about their disposable income and couldn't give a damn. And VWE and six pack are definitely not requirements for us. "
From my experience body image doesn't matter played rugby as a teenager so that my reason to being on the bigger side money's is just a piece of paper don't matter when you have a good heart and are enjoyable to be around |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Hello ladies and gentlemen I've finally got my profile sorted and was hoping people could tell me what they think what needs changing what can I do to make it stand out any advice is welcome "
Don't take this badly as we would not be your target audience in any event.
Your profile text is the standard rubbish that so many single males - especially young ones - post. Standard phrases, no character, no personality, no sense of what makes you you.
If you want to attract females here then you have to give them a reason to find you attractive.
Most females here are a bit older and may find your young cool cap look a bit off-putting (and I do say "most," not "all.")
Yes, the messy background photo goes strongly against you. The bad spelling does you no favours.
You're a good enough looking fellow but your profile lets you down. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hello ladies and gentlemen I've finally got my profile sorted and was hoping people could tell me what they think what needs changing what can I do to make it stand out any advice is welcome
Don't take this badly as we would not be your target audience in any event.
Your profile text is the standard rubbish that so many single males - especially young ones - post. Standard phrases, no character, no personality, no sense of what makes you you.
If you want to attract females here then you have to give them a reason to find you attractive.
Most females here are a bit older and may find your young cool cap look a bit off-putting (and I do say "most," not "all.")
Yes, the messy background photo goes strongly against you. The bad spelling does you no favours.
You're a good enough looking fellow but your profile lets you down."
Thank you for that advice I didn't think the hat picture would matter due to it being the only one and the one with the mess in the background I shall sort out as I took it as I was moving and the spelling I can't do much about as I am dyslexic and struggle with spelling |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Hello ladies and gentlemen I've finally got my profile sorted and was hoping people could tell me what they think what needs changing what can I do to make it stand out any advice is welcome
Don't take this badly as we would not be your target audience in any event.
Your profile text is the standard rubbish that so many single males - especially young ones - post. Standard phrases, no character, no personality, no sense of what makes you you.
If you want to attract females here then you have to give them a reason to find you attractive.
Most females here are a bit older and may find your young cool cap look a bit off-putting (and I do say "most," not "all.")
Yes, the messy background photo goes strongly against you. The bad spelling does you no favours.
You're a good enough looking fellow but your profile lets you down.
Thank you for that advice I didn't think the hat picture would matter due to it being the only one and the one with the mess in the background I shall sort out as I took it as I was moving and the spelling I can't do much about as I am dyslexic and struggle with spelling "
You may be surprised at how much does matter when you are competing against 100's of other single males for the attention of a lady who is spoilt for choice.
Your spelling and grammar can be improved by using a spelling and grammar checking tool, should you deem it worthwhile.
But the content of your text? Well, what do you do when you are out on a Friday night trying to pull? Sit in a darkened corner and mumble, "I fancy sex."
No, I assume you try to engage people with your personality and attract them. Read what your profile says. Would you, if you were a lady, find it anyway attractive? This is not so different from real life. At the moment, it screams no petsonality, no effort, no difference.
The "dark side" is a mystery and a worrying one for a female. If you have kinks, state what they are.
Good luck. |
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