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By *andsonjohnMan
over a year ago
in the eye of the storm |
"Hi all Id like some feed back on how I could improve my profile so I can at least get chatting to people,all advice welcome.Thanks."
To be brutal OP your profile reads a bit indecisive you say one thing then contradict it in the next sentence.
Its like you have written it to please everyone instead of for your benefit by that I mean be more clear in what your looking for . At the minute with your profile written how it is its very hard to tell what you want from others and what your offering in return .
Please don't take what I've written in the wrong way I'm just giving my thoughts on the words you have written not you as a human being . |
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By *ris1605 OP Man
over a year ago
manchester |
"Hi all Id like some feed back on how I could improve my profile so I can at least get chatting to people,all advice welcome.Thanks.
To be brutal OP your profile reads a bit indecisive you say one thing then contradict it in the next sentence.
Its like you have written it to please everyone instead of for your benefit by that I mean be more clear in what your looking for . At the minute with your profile written how it is its very hard to tell what you want from others and what your offering in return .
Please don't take what I've written in the wrong way I'm just giving my thoughts on the words you have written not you as a human being ."
No offence taken in fact quite the oppasit I'll see if I can be more clear and decisive. Thanks for the advice. |
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By *ris1605 OP Man
over a year ago
manchester |
"Five hairstyles ! Poor Harry only has one.
Perhaps an outdoor of different pic X "
I totally agree my picks are a bit confusing will take some of myself in the next day or so & replace the current lot. Thank you. |
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