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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey updated my profile a little, newish and hoping too see what you all think, on pictures and bio, if you like i can return the favour some how, like on a pic a comment whatever?? |
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Your pictures are fine. Your chatty nature comes across in the text but I think it might be an idea to ditch the bits about being bored, nobody wants to be boredom relief.
Good luck on fab.
Oh and no need to return the favour  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hey updated my profile a little, newish and hoping too see what you all think, on pictures and bio, if you like i can return the favour some how, like on a pic a comment whatever??"
I'd say way too much about fluff about your life, collage etc nothing about why your on a swinging site or what your looking for from potential playmates.... |
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By *anky_PankyWoman
over a year ago
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I agree with both above..... Your chatty nature comes across but at the same time it's like reading a bad cv? We don't need to know about everything, more interested in stuff related to fab. What are you looking for on fab? What kind of people interest you and what are you looking to give to others?
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Your pics are good, glad there's no dick pic. Liked reading your profile but I'd break it up a tad more into another paragraph. Just seems bulky and blurred into one lol sorry. I liked reading about your college though because it shows you have ambition. You could delete the college part (in case any older ladies doesn't want a young college boy) and leave bits saying you're ambitious, dedicated and put 100% effort into anything you put your mind too. Look great though.
No need to review mine. I'm already happy |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Hey updated my profile a little, newish and hoping too see what you all think, on pictures and bio, if you like i can return the favour some how, like on a pic a comment whatever??"
Your first sentence is redundant. We can see your age and height in the summary.
The rest is just general chit chat which does reveal something of your personality but gives no indication of why we would want sex with you.
The two "haha's" don't bode well for maturity (we are geriatrics). The spelling and grammar is atrocious.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thanks all i have edited my post, more opinions would be recived gratefully. I have readnall and made changes due to all."
Sentences begin with a capital letter.
You really need to use a spelling checker, as well. |
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