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Any kind people to crituque my first profile?

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Hello fabswingers! I'm new here, and to swinging in general. If anybody has a second to have a read of my profile and tell me if I'm doing it right that would be amazing!

Thanks in advance

Jack

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

hahaha a typo in the title of my first ever forum post.

an excellent start then!

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By *methyst01Man over a year ago

Ealing Common

"hahaha a typo in the title of my first ever forum post.

an excellent start then!"

You will never have a perfect profile. You can never please everybody.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Hello fabswingers! I'm new here, and to swinging in general. If anybody has a second to have a read of my profile and tell me if I'm doing it right that would be amazing!

Thanks in advance

Jack"

Dominant but ... Straight but...

Too much of hedging your bets, I am afraid. If you try to appeal to everyone, you will end up appealing to no one.

And for every profile that says "Cannot accommodate" without explaining it, the number of people interested in it diminish by 95%.

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By *offee and Cream 2Couple (MM) over a year ago

Loughborough

You cannot accommodate and you have no face picture.

Can't you book a hotel room?

And do you have a face pic to send privately....

Just saying..........

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Hello fabswingers! I'm new here, and to swinging in general. If anybody has a second to have a read of my profile and tell me if I'm doing it right that would be amazing!

Thanks in advance

Jack

Dominant but ... Straight but...

Too much of hedging your bets, I am afraid. If you try to appeal to everyone, you will end up appealing to no one.

And for every profile that says "Cannot accommodate" without explaining it, the number of people interested in it diminish by 95%.

This

Also alot of text...people will stop reading after the first few lines..

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By *nomeo n julietCouple over a year ago

Rayleigh

You describe yourself as straight. But yet you openly admit to enjoying looking at cocks and wanting to play with one. Honesty fella I'd say that makes you at the very least bicurious.

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By *damscottMan over a year ago

Greenwich

I like your profile. Honest, candid, funny. But though listed as bi-curious you've prevented interested guys like us from showing our appreciation.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I liked your profile.

It's well written.

The only negative thing is that you have no pics of your bum for me to perve at

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

you know it hadn't occurred to me that accommodating didn't have to be at home - have corrected, thanks for the suggestions

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"You describe yourself as straight. But yet you openly admit to enjoying looking at cocks and wanting to play with one. Honesty fella I'd say that makes you at the very least bicurious."

Thanks, I've been looking for the button to change that, couldn't find it and gave up - have found and corrected now

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Thanks to all of you for taking the time to read this and for your feedback - really appreciate it

I've made a few changes and I think I'm happy now - will see how I get along

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